HI there.

2016-07-06 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Today, It is raining too much in korea that is not good for my country. It have made so many problems in Korea, for example, so many river highest are before flood. So, very many Koreans worry about that may happen. Fortunately, now the raindrop is reducing. And for your question, originally, masters don't say too much.

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You are a master of your craft, Kirk! You always impress me with your ideas. I want to give you a big hand as well for constructing good sentences here. Thank you for informing me of what\'s happening there. I love it when you keep me posted.Stay safe and sound!_Klein_ Today, It is raining too much in korea that is not good for my country.>>Correct OR >> Today, it is raining heavily in Korea, which is not good.It have made so many problems in Korea, for example, so many river highest are before flood.>>It has caused so many problems in Korea; for example, so water levels in rivers increase/rise and next is flood.So, very many Koreans worry about that may happen.>>So, many Koreans worry that that may happen.Fortunately, now the raindrop is reducing.>>CorrectAnd for your question, originally, masters don\'t say too much. >>Correct!

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