Hi there.^^

2016-07-27 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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What are the global issues that you want us to talk about? Make a list and explain each briefly. My most interesting global issue is global investment. Maybe, it is beause of my situation. Honestly, same age group of me think that 'I want earn much money', But I think there are nothing valuable investments in Korea any more.^^ So, My most interesting global issue is global investment.

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Now that\'s what we will also talk about, Kirk. Thank you for letting me know about it.

We\'ve been talking about a lot of social issues and current affairs that I find interesting, so it is high time for us to talk about something that you really like. I know that you want to earn more money than now and I share the same feeling.

Let us do our best then in every task, grab every opportunity to earn, save more, and enjoy life doing what we want.

Again, thank you for sharing.

How\'s your day so far?

You must be quite busy for you postponed your class. Remember to do your best but take it easy. I know that you\'ll find balance between the two.

STAY SAFE AND SOUND and keep me posted.
Thank you, Kirk!

_Klein_

What are the global issues that you want us to talk about?
Make a list and explain each briefly.
My most interesting global issue is global investment.
>>The most interesting global issue for me is global investment.

Maybe, it is beause of my situation.
>>Correct (spelling check: because)
Honestly, same age group of me think that \'I want earn much money\', But I think there are nothing valuable investments in Korea any more.^^
>>Honestly, those from my age group think of earning much money, but I think there are no valuable investments in Korea anymore.

>>Honestly, those in the age group same as mine think, \"I want to earn much money,\" but I think nothing is a valuable investment in Korean anymore.
So, My most interesting global issue is global investment.

>>So, the most interesting global issue for me is global investment.

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