Hi there
학생이 쓴 원문
Have you had a nice day?
I had hardwork for a day.
Carrying block and commanding work to workers and other something...
Anyway, I felt time was veryfast for a day.
Please complete the happy your day.^^
And about your question...
Very long time ago, I throw the book at my student to study singing.
But now, I regret it because If i will be agree for someone if they can not understand what is wrong, they will not be changed.
So, I think the first way to change someone is understanding them what is wrong.^^
Please, understand my slopy writing.^^~
강사 첨삭
I truly had a nice time yesterday, Kirk.
I was given a chance to bond with some of my cousins.
How about you? Today, I hope that you will have better activities.
Thank you for answering my question.
I would just like to point out that your writing is not that sloppy. Keep writing, my friend.
Until our next chat.
-Klein-
Have you had a nice day?>>CorrectI had hardwork for a day. Carrying block and commanding work to workers and other something...>>I had hard work for a day, carrying blocks and commanding work to workers and something.Anyway, I felt time was veryfast for a day.>>Correct (very fast)Please complete the happy your day.^^>>Please complete your happy day.And about your question...Very long time ago, I throw the book at my student to study singing.>>And about your question, very long time ago, I threw the book at my student, so he would practice singing.But now, I regret it because If i will be agree for someone if they can not understand what is wrong, they will not be changed.>>But now, I regret it, because if I will agree with someone without understanding what is wrong, they will not change.So, I think the first way to change someone is understanding them what is wrong.^^>>So, I think the first way to change someone is to understand what is wrong with him or her.Please, understand my slopy writing.^^~
>>Please understand my sloppy writing.
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