Hi there :)
학생이 쓴 원문
Teacher Joey :)
I enjoyed talking to you during our class.
I'm going to write about me(self-introduction and my dairy life)
I'm going to graduate my university this coming August.
I studied Business management
Anyway,
I'm doing study like certificaties and English tests for taking a job.
I usually wake up at 8 in the morning by your calling.
(Thank you for waking me up everyday:))
After calling, I eat breakfast while listening to the radio.
and then, I start to study for certificate about computer.
While studing, time is so fast like arrow because I mostly keep dozing off.
After lunch, I take a breaktime.
And I prepare to vedio telephone class by 3:30.
After that, I excercise for my bodysharp.
As I write, my life is very simple.
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
Thank you so much for the composition and for sharing a bit about yourself.:)
Its really nice to know that you value yourself so much and with that, I commend you for a job well done..
Teacher Joey^^
Teacher Joey :)
I enjoyed talking to you during our class.
>>correct!
>>I always enjoy talking with you during our class.
I'm going to write about me(self-introduction and my dairy life)
>>Im gonna write something about myself.
I'm going to graduate my university this coming August.
>>Im going to graduate from my university this coming August.
I studied Business management
>>Im studying Business management.
Anyway,
I'm doing study like certificaties and English tests for taking a job.
>>Im doing some studies about certificates and English tests for taking a job.
I usually wake up at 8 in the morning by your calling.
>>I usually wake up at 8 in the morning through your call.
(Thank you for waking me up everyday:))
>>correct!
After calling, I eat breakfast while listening to the radio.
>>correct!
and then, I start to study for certificate about computer.
>>Then I start to study certificates about the computer.
While studing, time is so fast like arrow because I mostly keep dozing off.
>>correct!
>>Times flies when I study because I almost keep dozing off.
After lunch, I take a breaktime.
>>I usually have my break time after lunch.
And I prepare to vedio telephone class by 3:30.
>>And by 3:30 I already prepare for my video class.
After that, I excercise for my bodysharp.
>>After that, I exercise to make my body healthy.
As I write, my life is very simple.
>>From what I wrote, you can see that my lifestyle is really simple.
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