Hi there :)

2011-07-12 · 첨삭 강사 Connie

학생이 쓴 원문

Teacher Joey :) I enjoyed talking to you during our class. I'm going to write about me(self-introduction and my dairy life) I'm going to graduate my university this coming August. I studied Business management Anyway, I'm doing study like certificaties and English tests for taking a job. I usually wake up at 8 in the morning by your calling. (Thank you for waking me up everyday:)) After calling, I eat breakfast while listening to the radio. and then, I start to study for certificate about computer. While studing, time is so fast like arrow because I mostly keep dozing off. After lunch, I take a breaktime. And I prepare to vedio telephone class by 3:30. After that, I excercise for my bodysharp. As I write, my life is very simple.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, Thank you so much for the composition and for sharing a bit about yourself.:) Its really nice to know that you value yourself so much and with that, I commend you for a job well done.. Teacher Joey^^ Teacher Joey :) I enjoyed talking to you during our class. >>correct! >>I always enjoy talking with you during our class. I'm going to write about me(self-introduction and my dairy life) >>Im gonna write something about myself. I'm going to graduate my university this coming August. >>Im going to graduate from my university this coming August. I studied Business management >>Im studying Business management. Anyway, I'm doing study like certificaties and English tests for taking a job. >>Im doing some studies about certificates and English tests for taking a job. I usually wake up at 8 in the morning by your calling. >>I usually wake up at 8 in the morning through your call. (Thank you for waking me up everyday:)) >>correct! After calling, I eat breakfast while listening to the radio. >>correct! and then, I start to study for certificate about computer. >>Then I start to study certificates about the computer. While studing, time is so fast like arrow because I mostly keep dozing off. >>correct! >>Times flies when I study because I almost keep dozing off. After lunch, I take a breaktime. >>I usually have my break time after lunch. And I prepare to vedio telephone class by 3:30. >>And by 3:30 I already prepare for my video class. After that, I excercise for my bodysharp. >>After that, I exercise to make my body healthy. As I write, my life is very simple. >>From what I wrote, you can see that my lifestyle is really simple.

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