Hi there

2011-07-21 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Good morning Verna. Today We also have a nice sunshine. TodayI didn't go to the library. So I wish it is not hotter than yesterday. I have something to discuss with you. I would like to change the text book. like yesterday,you provide some text file or news about what at the previous day, and then I read and listen it in advance and we'll talk about the text. Actually, My husband started to study English on the power English. He recommend to me this method. How do you think? is it good or not?

강사 첨삭

Hello Saim,          Good morning! I understand. I think that뭠l be a great idea. I think that newspaper course will be very helpful for you! I뭢 going to endorse that to our manager so you can get access. Have a great day ahead! -Verna- Good morning Verna!>> CorrectToday We also have a nice sunshine. >> Today, we also have a nice sunshine.TodayI didn't go to the library. >>I didn뭪 go to the library today.So I wish it is not hotter than yesterday.>> CorrectI have something to discuss with you. >> CorrectI would like to change the text book. >>Correctlike yesterday,you provide some text file or news about what at the previous day, and then I read and listen it in advance and we'll talk about the text. >>Like yesterday, you provided some text file or news about what happened during the previous day. Then, I will read and listen to it in advance and we뭠l talk about it.Actually, My husband started to study English on the power English. >> Actually, my husband started to study at Power English.He recommend to me this method. >> He recommends  me this method. How do you think? is it good or not? >> What do you think? Is it good or not?

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