Hi there^^ And Thanks for your answer.^^

2014-07-30 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I am thankful for your response before today.^^ Especially, thanks for your letter on June 10. And I know your mind that you alway cheer up to me.^^ Like your word, I never give up all my work and everything that I must try.^^ And I am introducing a Famous Korean movie. Its mane is "The Host" or "A Monster". Maybe, If you will watch the movie, you might shout "Wow"! Of course, eventhough this movie is not more exciting than American blockbuster, I think the movie's completeness is so good among all Korean movies.^^ Anyway, I wish you whom find much more the fun of life in all interesting things.^^ Have a nice day.^^ And thank you for the writing that on the board about today's test. -Homework for today- I disagree this opinion. Because it is not cause from diffrent sex. For example, If there a woman is in front of men, the men never have Holding back. Reversly, If there is a woman is in front of prestige store that buy bag, she does not have holding back.^^

강사 첨삭

Hello, Kirk! I am trying to catch up with you again today. Of course, all I want is the best for you! You deserve it! I will try to grab a copy of this movie. Thanks for sharing it with me. Don\'t hold back to share more! Indeed, holding back doesn\'t have much to do with gender. Good job in voicing out your opinion Kirk! I will catch you on the next board, won\'t I? _Klein I am thankful for your response before today.^^ Especially, thanks for your letter on June 10. >>CorrectAnd I know your mind that you alway cheer up to me.^^ >>And I know that you always want to cheer my up.Like your word, I never give up all my work and everything that I must try.^^ >>Correct! OR >> Like what you said, I never give up all my work and everything that I must try.And I am introducing a Famous Korean movie. >>Correct Its mane is \"The Host\" or \"A Monster\". >>Correct [spelling check: name] OR >> The title is \"THE HOST\" or \"A MONSTER\".Maybe, If you will watch the movie, you might shout \"Wow\"! >>CorrectOf course, eventhough this movie is not more exciting than American blockbuster, I think the movie\'s completeness is so good among all Korean movies.^^>>Of course, even though this movie is not more exciting than an American blockbuster, I think the movie\'s completeness is the best among all Korean movies.Anyway, I wish you whom find much more the fun of life in all interesting things.^^ >>Anyway, I wish you find much more fun in life from interesting things.Have a nice day.^^ >>Correct!And thank you for the writing that on the board about today\'s test. >>And thank you for writing the sample test on the board today.-Homework for today-I disagree this opinion. Because it is not cause from diffrent sex. >>I disagree with this opinion because it is not because of difference in sex.For example, If there a woman is in front of men, the men never have Holding back. >>For example, if there is a woman in front of men, men never have to hold back.Reversly, If there is a woman is in front of prestige store that buy bag, she does not have holding back.^^ >>Reversely, if there is a woman in front of a prestigious store to buy a bag, she does not have to hold back.

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