HI! THERE ARE MORE SENTENCES (I THINK THREE TIME THAN THIS ) BUT THERE IS LIMITATION...THAT'S OK !

I’m gonna be a senior in the university. I totally don’t want to accept that I am definitely the middle of the twentieth. After one day, New Year will come to me. No one can avoid or ignore that the time passes. Actually, I’m very nervous entering the university again, because some friends of mine who is facing the graduation told me a lot of difficulties that every senior must have. Of course I believe that when I face the difficulties, I will be able to overcome them just like my friends did. Including facing the senior life, there are some goals I’m planning in 2015. Let me introduce them. First, I will find out where is my area. I don’t know my talent. I don’t know when my heart is beating. I don’t know what I desire. I do like listening to music, especially cheerful and strong beating one. I also like making something for giving to someone who I like. I like driving at night with very loud music. Honestly the third one is useless to certain my dream. :->

Hi [이름]!   It is good that you have had the time to write something down. Basing on what you have written and in the way you express yourself in writing, I think you love writing. I enjoyed reading your composition for it is so alive. If you have anything in mind to write, just send it to me for checking. ^^ Yes, there is a limit to how many words you can send, but you can divide your composition and send it the next day.. I am looking forward to reading more from you..^^ Happy New year again! T. Jennifer I’m gonna be a senior in the university.  >> Correct! I totally don’t want to accept that I am definitely the middle of the twentieth. >> I totally do not want to accept that I am now in my mid-twenties.  After one day, New Year will come to me. >>Correct! >>OR: In just a day, New Year will be upon us.  No one can avoid or ignore that the time passes. >> No one can avoid or ignore the passage of time.  Actually, I’m very nervous entering the university again, because some friends of mine who is facing the graduation told me a lot of difficulties that every senior must have. >> Actually, I am very nervous about entering university again, because some friends of mine who will soon told me about the many difficulties that a senior must have. Of course I believe that when I face the difficulties, I will be able to overcome them just like my friends did. >> Correct! Including facing the senior life, there are some goals I’m planning in 2015. Let me introduce them.>> Correct! >>OR: Including meeting the challenge of my senior year, there are some goals I have for 2015. Let me list them down. First, I will find out where is my area. >> First, I will find out what my area is. I don’t know my talent. >> Correct!  I don’t know when my heart is beating. >> I don\'t know for what my heart beats.  I don’t know what I desire. >> Correct! I do like listening to music, especially cheerful and strong beating one. >>I do like listening to music, especially cheerful and strong beat ones. I also like making something for giving to someone who I like. >> I also like making things to give to someone whom I like.  I like driving at night with very loud music. >> Correct!  Honestly the third one is useless to certain my dream. :-> >> Honestly, the third one is useless in ascertaining my dreams.