Hi there^^ how are you^^
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Did you have good days during the new year?
I was doing something for new planing.
But it is not easy.
First of all, I don't know that what is my first begining.
So, I was confused that problem.
Maybe, I will study english more hardly from Tomorrow.^^
See you Tomorrow Klein^^
Homework.
*Who among your friends do you think is winsome? Why do you say so?
Well... I don't know who is a winsome people.
Because, I think my whole friends are so nice.
So, It is hard work for me that i choose a person.
But, If i choose some one, i would choose my friend "Nicolas" in University then i said for our class.
I think he is most winsome.^^
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Kirk!
It\'s been a long time since you last posted your composition here on our board.
This is actually the first for this year, so I\'m glad!
Again, happy new year!
A blessed 2014 to everyone!
Kirk, since you\'ve decided to start working on your English communication skills even harder first and foremost this year, I should put my acts together then so I can be of more help to you.
Just keep on writing and do consider my pieces of advice.
Keep on watching English movies, Kirk, so you won\'t find English too bothersome.
While getting acquainted with native English speakers\' accent/s, expressions and the like, you are being entertained, so you won\'t be stressed out.
Animations are suitable for you, since you are not into action-packed films, like the Escape Plan.
And Kirk, do you think Nicolas is more winsome than you?
I\'m just curious.
Catch you later!
_Klein
Did you have good days during the new year?>>Correct!I was doing something for new planing.>>I was planning on doing something.But it is not easy.>>Correct
OR >> [present] I am planning on doing something but it is taking a toll on me.First of all, I don\'t know that what is my first begining.>>First of all, I don\'t know where to start.
>>First of all, I don\'t know where I should begin.So, I was confused that problem.>>So I was confused with that problem.
>>So I am faced with this dilemma.Maybe, I will study english more hardly from Tomorrow.^^>>Correct
OR >> Maybe, I will study English harder from tomorrow.
[Kirk, is it just maybe?]See you Tomorrow Klein^^>>Correct!Homework.*Who among your friends do you think is winsome? Why do you say so?Well... I don\'t know who is a winsome people.>>Well, I don\'t know who among my peers are winsome.
>>Well, I don\'t know who the winsome people are.
>>Well, I don\'t know a winsome person.Because, I think my whole friends are so nice.>>This is because I think all my friends are so nice.So, It is hard work for me that i choose a person.>>So, I find it hard to choose just one person.
>>So I find it difficult to choose just one among them.But, If i choose some one, i would choose my friend \"Nicolas\" in University then i said for our class.>>But if I should choose one, I would choose my friend Nicolas who I met in university like I said in our previous class.I think he is most winsome.^^
>>Correct
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