Hi there^^ Kelein^^

2014-04-04 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Klein^^ I geuss your opinion. but paper is not enough.;; homework for today Who among your friends is the live wire? Describe him or her in detail. You may include all the things that you like and dislike about him or her. Hm~ The best men of the live wire around me is me..; Ha... I think i am the best live wire. Because, sometimes when i make some project with my friend and dear people, i have planed and done almost things in the peojest.^^ Is it enough explanation? And the best woman of the live wire is my younger friend. Her name is "Sujin Kim". Her prefassional is managing resort. She is managing famous resort. This resort is very famous in Korea, This mame is "Ellisian Kangchon". She have busy life style. Especially, When a high-demand season, She is very busy. I think her who is became super women when those seasons. I know she have sleeping time in five hours when that time. It is amazing....;;;, isn't it? Anyway, She is the best live wire women around me.^^

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Hi, Kirk! I am not quite sure with your reference for your first remark below but I am not worried about it because I can ask you later to explain it to me. As for your answer to the question that I posted as your homework, I admire your confidence! Considering yourself as a live wire is really something! I\'m just intrigued by your friend, Sujin Kim. I want to know more about her. If you don\'t mind, can you tell me more things about her? We also need to talk more about the meaning of the idiom, live wire. I\'ll catch you in a couple of minutes, Kirk! _Klein Klein^^ I geuss your opinion. but paper is not enough.;;>>Klein, I acknowledge your opinion but I have to say that paper is not enough.homework for todayWho among your friends is the live wire? Describe him or her in detail. You may include all the things that you like and dislike about him or her.Hm~The best men of the live wire around me is me..; Ha...>>The best man who is a live wire in my life is myself. >>The best among the men in my life is no other than me.I think i am the best live wire.>>Correct!Because, sometimes when i make some project with my friend and dear people, i have planed and done almost things in the peojest.^^>>Because, sometimes, when I make some projects with my friends or people who are dear to me, I plan and do almost all things in the project.Is it enough explanation?>>Is this explanation enough?And the best woman of the live wire is my younger friend. >>And the best woman who is a live wire is my younger friend. Her name is \"Sujin Kim\". >>Correct!Her prefassional is managing resort.>>Her profession is manager. >>She manages a resort. >>She is a manager in a resort.She is managing famous resort.>>She is managing a famous resort.This resort is very famous in Korea, This mame is \"Ellisian Kangchon\".>>Correct!She have busy life style. Especially, When a high-demand season, She is very busy.>>She has a busy lifestyle, especially when its the season for high demands or if it is the peak season. I think her who is became super women when those seasons.>>I think she becomes a superwoman in these seasons.I know she have sleeping time in five hours when that time.>>I know she sleeps for five hours only during those times.It is amazing....;;;, isn\'t it?>>CorrectAnyway, She is the best live wire women around me.^^ >>Anyway, she is the best live wire among the women around me.

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