Hi there Klein^^

2013-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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Hi there Klein~~ Good to see you again.^^ I was having a day so busy, because of reading comprehension for your sentences. haha^^ And because another reason that you have used difficult words in the sentences, I was busy also.T.T But, I will try to comprehend yours. Would you please to use more easy words with your suggestions? Thanks you Klein^^ good night^^ from Kirk Home work. -What do you usually get off the top of your head when you speak of 'happiness'? All of times, I would say "God bless you!' and "Do you have a good day?' to another peolpe. Maybe, it is my habit. Klein~~ God bless you this night!!^^

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Good morning, Kirk! Now that you have enough time to study English, I would really like you to listen to the recordings of all our classes. Keep on writing as well, Kirk! I really love it when you share your thoughts here on the composition board. Please bear with me, Kirk. From now on, I will start using simpler words, so you won\'t find it hard comprehending my feedback. At least, now, you can answer the questions that I post as your homework. This is a great improvement on your part!  You make me proud! Keep it up, Kirk! _Klein Hi there Klein~~>>CorrectGood to see you again.^^>>CorrectI was having a day so busy, because of reading comprehension for your sentences. haha^^>>I was having a busy day, comprehending your sentences.And because another reason that you have used difficult words in the sentences, I was busy also.T.T>>And since you used complex words in your feedback, I had a hard time going through it.But, I will try to comprehend yours.>>Correct OR >> But I will try to comprehend your feedback.Would you please to use more easy words with your suggestions?>>Would you please use easier words in your feedback? >> Would you please use easier words in your comments and suggestions?Thanks you Klein^^>>Thank you, Klein. good night^^from Kirk>>CorrectHome work. >>Homework:-What do you usually get off the top of your head when you speak of \'happiness\'?All of times, I would say \"God bless you!\' and \"Do you have a good day?\' to another peolpe.>>All the time, I would say, \"God bless you!\" and \"Did you have a good day?\" [past] to other people.Maybe, it is my habit.>>CorrectKlein~~ God bless you this night!!^^ >>Correct

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