Hi there klein~~^^
학생이 쓴 원문
Do you have a good day Klein?^^
I have a good day today.
You too Klein?
But, I suffered to flu.
During a day, I was sick littel.
Please, pray for me.
And, Do you want to know about my friends?
They are my best friends in university.
Their major is same to my classical voice.
They have very hendsome face and good voice.
A man is studying now in America to "Church Music", and another work to "Seoul City Choir".
Is it enough?^^
Have a good night Klein^^
*Home work~
Have you tried getting someone off the hook without vacillating about it?
If yes, relate to me this incident.
If no, do you see yourself doing this for someone and for what reason would it be?
Yes, I had an experience in university.
When my friend's concert, I took progress of the concert, However he did not be prepared this concert until on time.
So, I did to say funny story to spectator sensibly.
So, He could off the hook this situation.
강사 첨삭
Kirk, you are always and will always be in my prayers.
I can sense that you are a wonderful person, so many people include you in their prayers.
Based on your story below, I am also certain that your friend owes you a lot.
Kirk, please don\'t ever change; but since change is inevitable and is the only constant thing in the world, just make sure that you change for the better, OK?
Study real hard and your hardwork will soon pay off.
I\'ll just lend you a hand as long as I can and as long as you need my help.
Have a great weekend, Kirk!
_Klein
Do you have a good day Klein?^^>>Correct
OR >> Did you have a good day, Klein? [past/end of the day]I have a good day today.>>Correct
OR >> I had a good day. [past]You too Klein?>>Did you have a good day, too, Klein?But, I suffered to flu.>>But I suffered from flu.
>>But I got the flu.
>>But I caught the flu.
During a day, I was sick littel.>>During the day, I was a little sick.Please, pray for me.>>Correct!
OR >> Please include me in your prayers.And, Do you want to know about my friends?>>Correct
OR >> And, do you want me to share something about my friends?They are my best friends in university.>>Correct!Their major is same to my classical voice.>>Their major is the same with mine, which is \"Classical Voice\". [classical music]
>>We took the same major, which is Classical Music.They have very hendsome face and good voice.>>They are very handsome with a good singing voice.
>>They have a handsome face and good singing voice.A man is studying now in America to \"Church Music\", and another work to \"Seoul City Choir\".>>One of them is studying \"Church Music\" in America no, while the other one works in \"Seoul City Choir\".Is it enough?^^>>Correct!Have a good night Klein^^>>Correct*Home work~
>>Homework: [one word]Have you tried getting someone off the hook without vacillating about it?If yes, relate to me this incident.If no, do you see yourself doing this for someone and for what reason would it be?Yes, I had an experience in university.>>CorrectWhen my friend\'s concert, I took progress of the concert, However he did not be prepared this concert until on time.>>When my friend had his concert, I took care of its progress. However, he did not prepare much for the concert until the presentation itself.So, I did to say funny story to spectator sensibly.>>So I had to say funny stories to the spectators sensibly.
>>So I had to share funny but sensible stories with the spectators.So, He could off the hook this situation.
>>I did it so he could get off the hook in this situation.
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