Hi there^^ Klein^^

2014-04-21 · 첨삭 강사 Klein

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I apologize for thursday situation. Wednesday night, I was so busy, because I prepareed for nextday work. In fact, At the tuesday morning i went to my father's work field. It is a sudden request from my father. So, I certainly needed to sleep at early evening. I am sorry.^^;; And i read you almost all mentions and letter.^^ I think that is useful idea and common sense. Thanks so much about that.^^ And, I listined it music.!! It is my style.!! That song is so good.^^ Thank you! If all your friends are teasing someone who you are not acquainted with too much, would you just let it ride? Why? If my friends are teasing or hitting someone, I would say to their "Stop it!" Because, it is foul play moreover to many people teas some one is worse. And if my friend are hitting a man, I would hit them like this.!! (Of course, hitting people is unlawful in Korea. Maybe, it is like your country. Isn't it?) P.S Please pray for the Koreans in the boat. Please...

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Kirk, let us continue to pray for your fellow Koreans. Not only them but everybody else. You know what in Nigeria, many girls were abducted. How I hope they are safe. As for the both of us, let us take things easy. It\'s good to hear that you are helping your father out. Keep it up Kirk! Your family, more than anyone else needs you. Look after them! Keep safe, Kirk and never let anyone tease others. Do not let it ride! I\'ll catch you then tomorrow! _Klein I apologize for thursday situation.>>I apologize for the situation on Thursday.Wednesday night, I was so busy, because I prepareed for nextday work.>>On Wednesday night, I was so busy because I prepared for work the next day.In fact, At the tuesday morning i went to my father\'s work field.>>In fact, on Tuesday morning, I went to my father\'s workfield.It is a sudden request from my father.>>CorrectSo, I certainly needed to sleep at early evening.>>So, I certainly needed to sleep early in the evening.I am sorry.^^;;>>CorrectAnd i read you almost all mentions and letter.^^>>And I read almost all of your comments and letters.I think that is useful idea and common sense.>>I think they are useful with common sense.Thanks so much about that.^^>>CorrectAnd, I listined it music.!!>>And I listened to the song.It is my style.!! That song is so good.^^Thank you!>>CorrectIf all your friends are teasing someone who you are not acquainted with too much, would you just let it ride? Why?If my friends are teasing or hitting someone, I would say to their \"Stop it!\">>If my friends are teasing or hitting someone, I would tell them to stop it. >>If my friends are teasing or hitting someone, I would say to them, \"Stop it!\"Because, it is foul play moreover to many people teas some one is worse.>>Because, it is foul play; moreover, too many people teasing one person is worse.And if my friend are hitting a man, I would hit them like this.!!>>And if my friends are hitting a man, I would hit them badly. (Of course, hitting people is unlawful in Korea. >>Correct Maybe, it is like your country. Isn\'t it?)>>Maybe, it is likely in your country, isn\'t it? P.SPlease pray for the Koreans in the boat. Please... >>Correct!

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