Hi there^^ Klein^^
학생이 쓴 원문
How about your week end^^
I was not so being busy until this sunday morning.
But, When i finished to practice with my choir, I knew this fact that i was late.T,T
Becasue, i had a promise to met with my friend "Nicolas Hwang" at music center.
So after practicing, I rushed for meeting with "Nick".
Anyway, I did late to meet with nick however to go this place was very hard work for me.T,T
But, This concert was as so fantastic as my hard work.^^
(Do you know "King's Singers concert"? It is the name that i watched singer tonight.")
Homework for today.
Hmmm.... Klein..
II'm so sorry... i don't know the way that i make me to knock you daed.^^;;
What do you want me to do?^^
Do you have an act to want to me to do?^^
If you will talk to me about you to want, I must do that next our class.^^;;
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Kirk!
I had a cool weekend! I made a caricature for one of my good friends. He liked it, so I\'m really glad that I made him smile.
As for your weekend, I think it sounds really fantastic! You even went to see the King\'s Singers\' concert with your good friend Nick.
I do not really know much about this group but I\'m thinking, you can somehow knock me dead if you are going to sing like one of the members of this group. How does that sound?
Perhaps, you and Nick can sing better than any one of them.
It\'s really nice to know that you two get to spend quality time together. I like your kind of friendship! I really do!!!
Well Kirk, I already said it. You can sing one of your very own compositions in English on our next meeting so you can knock me dead.
Are you up for the challenge?
Enjoy the rest of the afternoon, Kirk! Have a good one.
_Klein
How about your week end^^>>How about your weekend?
>>How was your weekend?I was not so being busy until this sunday morning.>>I was not so busy until this Sunday morning.
>>I was not being so busy until this Sunday morning.But, When i finished to practice with my choir, I knew this fact that i was late.T,T>>But when I finished my practice with the choir, I knew the fact that I was already late.
>>But when I finished my practice with the choir, I learned the fact that it was already late.Becasue, i had a promise to met with my friend \"Nicolas Hwang\" at music center.>>Because I promised to meet my friend, Nicolas Hwang, as the music center.So after practicing, I rushed for meeting with \"Nick\".>>So after practicing, I rushed to meet Nick.Anyway, I did late to meet with nick however to go this place was very hard work for me.T,T>>Anyway, I met Nick late because I had a hard time going to this place.But, This concert was as so fantastic as my hard work.^^>>But this concert was so fantastic that it outweighed my hard work.(Do you know \"King\'s Singers concert\"? >>Correct!
It is the name that i watched singer tonight.\")>>It is the name of the concert that I watched tonight.
>>It is the name of the vocal ensemble that I watched tonight.Homework for today.Hmmm.... Klein.. >>CorrectII\'m so sorry... i don\'t know the way that i make me to knock you daed.^^;;>>I\'m so sorry, i don\'t know how to knock you dead.What do you want me to do?^^>>Correct!Do you have an act to want to me to do?^^>>Do you want me to do an act?If you will talk to me about you to want, I must do that next our class.^^;;
>>If you tell me what you want, I will do it on our next class.
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