Hi there Leny.

2013-09-13 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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How are you today? Is feel good?? In Korea rain is droping now like to yesterday. But my emotion is better than last night in spite of not enough sleep. Perhaps this reason is mate with my swimming club members in yesterday. My feeling better is keeping to now.^^ It's good. Anyway, I am being like more make sentence bofore. It is for your effort. Thank you teacher.^^ However my reading and seapking skill is not good yet.T,T I am sad to this. Because, Is it Must overcome anydays Leny?? I will studing these have the faith.^^ Todday's making sentence is would be perfect..... I hope this. To better than before i wish.... From student Kirk.

강사 첨삭

Dear [Name], Well, you improved your sentences indeed! :) Actually, your sentences make sense but the thing is you have to be more careful about your prepositions like in, at, on and so on. Also, when you add the -ING to a word, check if it is necessary, okay? You don\'t have to make perfect sentences to show me that you\'re learning. Learning this language is hard, I know but little by little, you\'ll be able to learn speak, read, and use English as a means of communicating with your friends. Don\'t be un a hurry. ^^ Thank you for writing something for me to check today. You have a great weekend ahead!   Sincerely, ~T. Leny How are you today? >>> CORRECT! Is feel good??>>> Do you feel good? >>> Is the feeling good?In Korea rain is droping now like to yesterday.>>> It\'s raining here just like yesterday. >>> The weather today is the same as yesterday.But my emotion is better than last night in spite of not enough sleep.>>> CORRECT! >>> But my emotion is better today than last night in spite of the fact that I didn\'t sleep well.Perhaps this reason is mate with my swimming club members in yesterday.>>> Perhaps the reason is because I met my swimming club members yesterday. *** Don\'t add the preposition \"in\" to the word \"yesterday.\"My feeling better is keeping to now.^^>>> CORRECT!It\'s good.>>> CORRECT!Anyway, I am being like more make sentence bofore.>>> Anyway, I am making better sentences these days than before.It is for your effort.>>> It is because of your effort to teach me.Thank you teacher.^^>>> CORRECT!However my reading and seapking skill is not good yet.T,T>>> However, my reading and speaking skills are not goot yet. T.TI am sad to this.>>> I\'m sad because of this. >>> I feel sad about this.Because, Is it Must overcome anydays Leny??>>> Because I must overcome it, Leny.I will studing these have the faith.^^>>> I have faith to study harder.Todday\'s making sentence is would be perfect.....>>> Today, my sentences should be perfect. >>> Today, the sentences that I made should be perfect.I hope this.>>> I\'m hoping for this. >>> I\'m hopeful for it.To better than before i wish....>>> I wish that it is better than before.From student Kirk. >>> CORRECT!

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