Hi there^^Leny.

2013-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Leny

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Today's homework. 1.I have got a nice room. 2.She has got a cat. 3.Jack has got a pet. 4.The sister has got great teachers. 5.He has got an old bike. It's finshed. Hi there~~ Leny. Today was good day to me. I worked to my field energetic. It is good to work something. Anyway, It make me tired is a fact.^^;; Leny~ I have a request to you. My choir member was fainted after finsh choir exersice in last sunday. I was shooked that because I think it was made because of me. May do you have enough time, you pray for her. Thank you theacher have a good night. From kirk.

강사 첨삭

Hello there!
Thank you for sending this in.
Keep up the good job, okay?^^

You are also doing well at work. Thumbs up!^^
Regarding your request, I will certainly pray for her safety.

I will also pray for you and all your loved ones.^^ [Please include me in your prayers, too.^^]
Enjoy your day!^^

Today\'s homework.
>>Correct!
1.I have got a nice room.
>>Correct!
2.She has got a cat.
>>Correct!
3.Jack has got a pet.
>>Correct!
4.The sister has got great teachers.
>>The sisters _____have got _____ great teachers.
5.He has got an old bike.
>>Correct!
It\'s finshed.
>>Correct!
Hi there~~ Leny.
>>Correct!
Today was good day to me.
>>It\'s a good day for me.^^
I worked to my field energetic.
>>I worked in the field energetically.
It is good to work something.
>>It is good to work on something.
Anyway, It make me tired is a fact.^^;;
>>Anyway, it is a fact that it made me feel tired.^^
Leny~ I have a request to you.
>>Correct!
My choir member was fainted after finsh choir exersice in last sunday.
>>One of the choir members fainted after the choir exercise last Sunday.
I was shooked that because I think it was made because of me.
>>I was shocked because I think it was because of me.
May do you have enough time, you pray for her.
>>If you have time, please pray for her.
Thank you theacher have a good night.
>>Thank you teacher and have a good night! ^^
From kirk.

>>From Kirk.^^

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