Hi. This is first.
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi. Avery teacher !
Nice to meet you. I\'m Cathy, 23 years old.
From last June, I never study English at all. I have many happengs, I know those are just excuses.
Anyway, I think I\'m not busy compared to last year. So I will be try to be talking, listening, reading and writing English. Can you help me, please?
I wll have Toiec test next month. I\'ve got book I bought last year. One of my English study plan is Toiec in the day when I don\'t have English class. I hope I will do that.
My college major is Tax Accounting. I think it is suitable for me. Even I hate math, It\'s okay to calculate about money. My mom who is a math teacher said to me \"It\'s ironic\".
I think it\'s enough to introduce my self. I know doing perfect is reallt difficult and doing one\'s best is also hard. So before I got stress, I stopped writing English. That\'s only way I can do it continuously.
Thank you for reading my mess wrting.
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Cathy! I like your name. ^^ Thanks for introducing yourself. I hope to get to know you more during our class.
I will try my best to help you, ok? I know you will do great in your TOEIC exam if you work hard. Fighting! ^^
Have a lovely day and I\'ll talk to you more tomorrow. See you! ^_^
~T.Avery
Hi. Avery teacher !
>> Hi, teacher Avery!
Nice to meet you. I\'m Cathy, 23 years old.
>> CORRECT
From last June, I never study English at all.
>> From last June, I have never studied English at all.
I have many happengs, I know those are just excuses.
>> There are a lot of things that happened, but I know those are just excuses.
Anyway, I think I\'m not busy compared to last year. So I will be try to be talking, listening, reading and writing English.
>> Anyway, I think I\'m not busy compared to last year, so I will try to be talking, listening, reading and writing English.
Can you help me, please?
>> CORRECT
I wll have Toiec test next month.
>> I will have a TOEIC test next month.
I\'ve got book I bought last year.
>> I got a book which I bought last year.
One of my English study plan is Toiec in the day when I don\'t have English class.
>> One of my English study plans is learning TOEIC during some days when I don\'t have an English class.
I hope I will do that.
>> CORRECT
My college major is Tax Accounting.
>> CORRECT
I think it is suitable for me.
>> CORRECT
Even I hate math, It\'s okay to calculate about money.
>> Even if I hate math, I find it okay to calculate money.
My mom who is a math teacher said to me \"It\'s ironic\".
>> CORRECT
I think it\'s enough to introduce my self.
>> I think my self introduction is enough.
I know doing perfect is reallt difficult and doing one\'s best is also hard. So before I got stress, I stopped writing English.
>> I know being perfect is really difficult and doing one\'s best is also hard, so before I got stressed, I stopped writing English.
That\'s only way I can do it continuously.
>> That\'s the only way I can do it continuously.
Thank you for reading my mess wrting.
>> Thank you for reading my messy writing.
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