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2018-07-16 · 첨삭 강사 Elisha

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KMH <Sales proportions> Transmission part : 11.43% Broadcast channel part : 9.71% The media information service : 17.13% The material of semiconductor : 30.61% Golf course : 9.98% Distribution service : 19.34% Watching 'The material of semiconductor' among the <Sales proportions>, although it takes more than 30% of the ratio, actually the profits of it often change from surplus to deficit. 'KMH' is the largest shareholder of 'KMH HITECH ; the company producing the material of semiconductor' (19.71% among the all stocks of KMH HITECH, it is about $10 million in market value.) The $10 million are not a big part of the whole assets. But for recently 3 quarters, sales and profits have decreased. Therefore unless selling the stocks of 'KMH HITECH' and results getting better, don't buy.

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! I\'m learning a lot from you when it comes to investment. Thank you for sharing your knowledge with me. Take care and see you! ~TEACHER ELISHA

KMH
< Sales proportions>
Transmission part : 11.43%
Broadcast channel part : 9.71%
The media information service : 17.13%
The material of semiconductor : 30.61%
Golf course : 9.98%
Distribution service : 19.34%
Watching \'The material of semiconductor\' among the <Sales proportions>,
although it takes more than 30% of the ratio, actually the profits of it often change from surplus to deficit.

>> Watching the material used to make a semiconductor among the proportion of sales,which takes more than 30% of the ratio,  the profits can actually often change from surplus to deficit.
 \'KMH\' is the largest shareholder of \'KMH HITECH ; the company producing the material of semiconductor\'
(19.71% among the all stocks of KMH HITECH, it is about $10 million in market value.)

>> KMH is the largest shareholder of KMH HITECH, the company who produces the material used to make semiconductors (19.71% among the all stocks of KMH HITECH, it is about $10 million in market value).
 The $10 million are not a big part of the whole assets.

>>$10 million is not a big part of the whole asset.
 But for recently 3 quarters, sales and profits have decreased.

>> But for the recent quarter, sales and profits have decreased.
 Therefore unless selling the stocks of \'KMH HITECH\' and results getting better, don\'t buy.

>>  Therefore unless selling the stocks of KMH HITECH can make the results better, don\'t buy the product.

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