Hi Tina!
학생이 쓴 원문
Hello Tina! I think you are very diligent when i heard that you said to me you have woke up at 5 am and have gone to jogging about 1 hour in weekend! WOW! In my case it was hard to me waking up at 7 am. After that I have been jogging about 20 minutes or have been working out my muscles. I think I'm a little more diligent than other normal people but you are most diligent people when i compare me with you. I'm inspired you. HA! HA! HA!
Anyway here is my homework.
1. I'm sitting on the sofa.
2. We are watching TV.
3. Are you from England?
4. He is going home.
5. We are playing football.
6. It is wonderful day today.
7. They are speaking English.
I have to go to my part time job now. Have a nice day Tina~ Oh! I forgot something. Who is Smith? you wrote ' Good morning Smith!' in our feedback section. you wrote wrong name, right? 'ㅁ'?
강사 첨삭
James! My apologies for writing the wrong name on the comment box, I am really sorry.
I hope you can forgive me. I am laughing at myself now for doing that.
I just got the name mixed up. I meant to write James but I don\'t know how I ended
up writing \"Smith\" instead.
Anyway, thank you very much for doing your homework.
I will talk to you tomorrow. Take care!
----T. Tina-----
Hello Tina!
>>>CORRECT
I think you are very diligent when i heard that you said to me you have woke up at 5 am and have gone to jogging about 1 hour in weekend!
>>>I think that you are very diligent when I heard you say to me that you have to wake up at 5 a.m. to go jogging for about an hour in the weekend!
WOW! In my case it was hard to me waking up at 7 am.
>>>WOW! In my case, it was hard for me to wake up at 7a.m.
After that I have been jogging about 20 minutes or have been working out my muscles.
>>>After that, I have been jogging for about 20 minutes or I have been working out my muscles.
I think I\'m a little more diligent than other normal people but you are most diligent people when i compare me with you.
>>>I think that I\'m a little more diligent than other normal people but you are the most diligent person when I compare myself with you.
I\'m inspired you.
>>>I\'m inspired by you.
>>>OR You inspire me.
HA! HA! HA!Anyway here is my homework.1. I\'m sitting on the sofa.
>>>CORRECT2. We are watching TV.
>>>CORRECT3. Are you from England?
>>>CORRECT4. He is going home.
>>>CORRECT5. We are playing football.
>>>CORRECT6. It is wonderful day today.
>>>It is a wonderful day today.7. They are speaking English.
>>>CORRECT I have to go to my part time job now.
>>>CORRECT
Have a nice day Tina~ Oh! I forgot something.
>>>CORRECT
Who is Smith? you wrote \' Good morning Smith!\' in our feedback section.
>>>CORRECT
you wrote wrong name, right?
>>>You wrote the wrong name, right?
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