Hi Tina!

2012-11-01 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

학생이 쓴 원문

Good after noon! I changed my plan going to sleep. I made a decision to safe my time. So I'm doing my homework now after lunch. HA! HA! HA! I always have been trying speaking English well in our class. But I think I couldn't well as much as I want. I didn't know word what I want to say and I couldn't emerge sentence what I want to say. So I talked to my father about my problem. My father talked to me ' Hey James don't strive for speaking English well but Just enjoy it!' Ah~! Then I could realize how can my father speak English well. I made a decision just enjoy it! Here is my homework. 1. She performed magnificently. It was a magnificent beautiful performance. 2. Her voice sounds beautifully. She sang the song exactly as it was written. We heard it perfectly. 3. He was a very sensible person. He acted very sensibly. 4. Mike wrote too slowly on the exam. He always writes slowly. 5. Talk softly or don't talk at all. The music played softly. Have a nice day Tina~!

강사 첨삭


Hello!
It sure is not bad to strive to be better in speaking in English.
You just have to exert enough effort to achieve your goals.
I am so happy that you are likely confiding to me.
Enjoy speaking in English and be better in speaking it, okay?
Have a great afternoon!
_T.Tina^^
Good afternoon!
>> Correct

I changed my plan going to sleep.
>> Correct
I made a decision to safe my time.
>> I have decided that I will save my time.
So I\'m doing my homework now after lunch. HA! HA! HA!

>> Correct
I always have been trying speaking English well in our class.

>> I always have been trying to speak in English well in our class.
But I think I couldn\'t well as much as I want.

>> But I think I couldn\'t be well as much as I want.
I didn\'t know word what I want to say and I couldn\'t emerge sentence what I want to say.
>> I didn\'t know the word that I want to say and I couldn\'t come up with a sentence.
So I talked to my father about my problem.
>> Correct
My father talked to me \' Hey James don\'t strive for speaking English well but Just enjoy it!\'
>> My father told me, \" Hey James! Don\'t strive to speak in English well. Just enjoy it!\"
Ah~! Then I could realize how can my father speak English well.
>> Ah! Then I realized how can my father speak English well?
I made a decision just enjoy it!

>> I made my decision. I will just enjoy it!
Here is my homework.

>> Correct
1. She performed magnificently.
>> Correct
It was a magnificent beautiful performance
.
>> It was a magnificently beautiful performance.
2. Her voice sounds beautifully.

>> Her voice sounds beautiful.
She sang the song exactly as it was written.
>> Correct
We heard it perfectly.

>> Correct
3. He was a very sensible person.

>> Correct
He acted very sensibly.
>> Correct
4. Mike wrote too slowly on the exam.
>> Correct
He always writes slowly.
>> Correct
5. Talk softly or don\'t talk at all.
>> Correct
The music played softly.
>> Correct
Have a nice day Tina~!
>> Correct

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