Hi Tina!

2012-12-10 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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It's a happy Monday again. I'm sorry that we just have only two more class before finishing this class. I will try to do my best during this two class as well. And now I just have only 9 more days before setting out to Europe, so I would have to spend most of my time to prepare my trip not practice speak in English. And my part time job will be finished this coming Friday. Finally the day that I really hope has been coming! I'm really excited! I'm planing to write postscript in bulletin board with my picture at Wednesday. Please write a comment to my postscript. hahahahaha Have a nice day! See you! Here is my homework. 1. I have got a nice room. 2. She has got a cat. 3. Jack has got a pet. 4. The sister have got a great teacher. 5. He has got an old bike. 6. They have got a goldfish.

강사 첨삭

Hi there James!!^^ 

I as as well excited for your upcoming trip!! ^^ Just like what I always tell you, enjoy the things that you are doing so you\'ll be able to have  a quality time during your Europe tour!! ^^ Yes of course I would be willing to post any comment on your postscript! ^^ Just take care. I am really hoping that we will get to meet again. ^^ 

~~~T.Tina~~~

It\'s a happy Monday again.

>> Correct

I\'m sorry that we just have only two more class before finishing this class.

>> I\'m sorry that we only have two classes remaining.

I will try to do my best during this two class as well.

>> I will do my best in the remaining two classes as well.

And now I just have only 9 more days before setting out to Europe, so I would have to spend most of my time to prepare my trip not practice speak in English.

>> Now I have only 9 days to go before setting out to Europe, so I will have to spend most of my time preparing for my trip instead of practising English.

And my part time job will be finished this coming Friday.

>> Correct

Finally the day that I really hope has been coming!

>> Finally, the day I\'ve been waiting for is approaching!

I\'m really excited!

>> Correct

I\'m planing to write postscript in bulletin board with my picture at Wednesday.

>> I\'m planning to write a post on the bulletin board with my picture on Wednesday.

Please write a comment to my postscript. hahahahaha

>> Correct

Have a nice day!

>> Correct

See you!

>> Correct

Here is my homework.

>> Correct

1. I have got a nice room.

>> Correct

2. She has got a cat.

>> Correct

3. Jack has got a pet.

>> Correct

4. The sister have got a great teacher.

>> The sisters have got great teachers.

5. He has got an old bike.

>> Correct

6. They have got a goldfish.

>> Correct

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