Hi Tina!

2012-12-17 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Hi~ Thanks for the add me at the Facebook Tina. Now is 1:30 am on Monday night. Following your advice I tried to spend my time worthwhile in weekend. I met my friend who visited Europe 10 ago in Saturday and I got a lot of information about Europe. And she gave me a lot of coin of Euro. I was so busy to prepare my trip and I was really excited. Just two more day, finally my trip will be started! I will plane to spend all of my time to prepare my trip as same as weekend. Anyway see you at 11:30 am. Here is my homework. 1. Dogs love bones, but they don't love cheese. 2. Where does Sam and Ben hide their CDs? 3. We eat pizza, but we don't eat hamburgers. 4. Does Mrs. [Name] read magazines? 5. Do the boys play cricket outside?

강사 첨삭

Good morning to you James!! 

Happy Monday!! ^^ I slept so late today. I hope then that you had a great weekend. ^^ Yes use the remaining time to prepare for your trip. It is important to make a list of all the things that you need to bring in order for you not to miss a thing. I am too excited for you. I can\'t wait to see your pictures. ^^ Just always remember to take care and be aware about the necessary things that you need to know about your trip. 

Hi~ Thanks for the add me at the Facebook Tina.

>>>Hi, Thanks for adding me on Facebook Tina. 

Now is 1:30 am on Monday night.

>>>It\'s 1:30 A.M. on Monday dawn.

Following your advice I tried to spend my time worthwhile in weekend.

>>>I followed your advise, I spent my weekend with worthwhile activities.

I met my friend who visited Europe 10 ago in Saturday and I got a lot of information about Europe.

>>>I met my friend who visited Europe 10 years ago last Saturday and I got a lot of informations about Europe.

And she gave me a lot of coin of Euro.

>>>She gave me a lot of Euro coins.

I was so busy to prepare my trip and I was really excited.

>>>Correct! 

Just two more day, finally my trip will be started!

>>>Just one more day and finally I will start with my trip. 

I will plane to spend all of my time to prepare my trip as same as weekend.

>>>I planed to spend all of time to prepare for my trip.

Anyway see you at 11:30 am.

>>>Correct!! 
 Here is my homework.

1. Dogs love bones, but they don\'t love cheese.

>>>Correct!

2. Where does Sam and Ben hide their CDs?

>>>Correct!

3. We eat pizza, but we don\'t eat hamburgers.

>>>Correct!

4. Does Mrs. [Name] read magazines?

>>>Correct!

5. Do the boys play cricket outside?

>>>Correct!

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