Hi Tina~ this is a homework for next monday. HA! HA! HA

2012-10-12 · 첨삭 강사 Tina

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Hello~ here is james. I submit my homework for nextmonday. But I have question about term of restrant service that i want to know today. Thank you ^^ Here it is homework. Write apostrophe 's into the gaps 1. This is [Name]'s book. 2. Let's go to the Smiths' house. 3. The childern's room is upstairs. 4. John's sister is twelve years old. 5. Susan and Steve's phones and bags have blue sticker. Or Teir phones and bags have blue sticker. 6. Men's shoes are on the second floor. Or Their shoes are on the second floor. In this parts are my question about term of restrant. I write in this section, please give me correnction. 1. Hello. Welcome our restrant. We have table and bar. Where do you want to seat? 2. Thank you for visting our restrant. Here your receipt. Have a nice day! 3. Do you wanna drink some donejang? 4. Execuse me. This your oder.(음식나왔습니다.) I set for you. Enjoy your meal. 5. Are you finish your meal? I count for you. Did you enjoy your meal?

강사 첨삭

HI! Thank you for doing your homework. I appreciate your effort in learning English. Thank you for asking questions.  Keep up the good work!   You were able to express your ideas well. Pamper yourself this weekend and have fun! See you nextweek!

T.Tina

Here are my corrections for you:

Hello~

>>Correct!

here is james.

>>This is [Name].

I submit my homework for nextmonday.

>>I submitted my homework for Monday.

But I have question about term of restrant service that i want to know today.

>>But I have questions about the terms used in a restaurant that I want to know.

Thank you ^^

>>Correct!
Here it is homework.

>>Here is my homework.
Write apostrophe \'s into the gaps
1. This is [Name]\'s book.

>>Correct!
2. Let\'s go to the Smiths\' house.

>>Correct!
3. The childern\'s room is upstairs.

>>The children;s room is upstairs.
4. John\'s sister is twelve years old.

>>Correct!
5. Susan and Steve\'s phones and bags have blue sticker. Or Teir phones and bags have blue sticker.

>>Susan\'s and Steve;s bags have blue stickers.
6. Men\'s shoes are on the second floor.Or Their shoes are on the second floor.

>>Correct! (Your first answer is the correct one)
In this parts are my question about term of restrant.

>>For this part,these are my questions about the terms used in a restaurant.

I write in this section, please give me correnction.

>>I wrote this at the latter part,please give me corrections.
1. Hello. Welcome our restrant. We have table and bar. Where do you want to seat?

>>Hello!Welcome to our restaurant.We have lots of tables and chairs and we also have a bar.Where do you want to seat?
2. Thank you for visting our restrant. Here your receipt. Have a nice day!

>>Thank you for visiting our restaurant.Here is your receipt.Have a nice day!
3. Do you want to drink some donejang?

>>Correct

OR >>Do you want to have some donejang?
4. Execuse me. This your oder.(음식나왔습니다.) I set for you. Enjoy your meal.

>>Excuse me,this is your order.Enjoy your meal.
5. Are you finish your meal? I count for you. Did you enjoy your meal?

>>Are you finished eating?I can count the change for you.Did you enjoy your meal?

OR >>Are you done with your meal?I can count the change for you.How was the food?

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