Hi~ Tiny

2011-01-12 · 첨삭 강사 Karla

학생이 쓴 원문

I`m sorry for waiting. And you also called me 4 times. I had an urgent incident. I made some mistake and have fixed, at that time. Anyway, nice to meet you again. I asked Power English extending this class. Good night.

강사 첨삭

Hi Se Il! Thank you for letting me know and for extending our class.^0^ These are your corrections:  I`m sorry for waiting. And you also called me 4 times. >>I am sorry you waited and called me four times.I had an urgent incident. >>correct^0^I made some mistake and have fixed, at that time. >>I had some trouble and I have to fix it at that time.Anyway, nice to meet you again. >>correct! (Nice to meet you too! ^0^) I asked Power English extending this class. >>I asked your manager to extend this class. Good night! >>correct^0^

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