Hi~ Tiny
학생이 쓴 원문
I`m sorry for waiting. And you also called me 4 times.
I had an urgent incident.
I made some mistake and have fixed, at that time.
Anyway, nice to meet you again. I asked Power English extending this class.
Good night.
강사 첨삭
Hi Se Il!
Thank you for letting me know and for extending our class.^0^
These are your corrections:
I`m sorry for waiting. And you also called me 4 times.
>>I am sorry you waited and called me four times.I had an urgent incident.
>>correct^0^I made some mistake and have fixed, at that time.
>>I had some trouble and I have to fix it at that time.Anyway, nice to meet you again.
>>correct! (Nice to meet you too! ^0^)
I asked Power English extending this class.
>>I asked your manager to extend this class.
Good night!
>>correct^0^
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