Hi Tyni

2012-01-13 · 첨삭 강사 Tiny

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I have been to the city of China 'Dharyun' for the travel There are a lot of attracive tourist such as big chinese restauran, fhasionable chinese people and chinese hamburger. I can't help remembering my chinese travel.

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Hello [이름], Thank you for sharing a little about your trip to China! Enjoy your weekend! -Tiny^0^ I have been to the city of China \'Dharyun\' for the travel >>I have been to China, 'Dharyun' city for a travel. There are a lot of attracive tourist such as big chinese restauran, fhasionable chinese people and chinese hamburger. >>SPELLING CHECK: attractive, restaurant, and fashionable >> There are a lot of attractive tourist spots such as big Chinese restaurants, fashionable Chinese people and Chinese hamburger.   I can\'t help remembering my chinese travel. >> I can\'t help remembering my trip to China.  

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