Hi Venus~

2011-03-30 · 첨삭 강사 Venus

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I was sleeping while my class :( thank you for calling in succession. As you told me earlier, I will go to bed early. Here are my school life. I going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have a different schedules everyday. I go to school at 10:30 in the morning, as It is time to begin my first class. That subject is relationship of employer-employee. The professor emphasis on relationship between human and human. That class is end at noon. And I have 2 classes after that. The one is class about TOEIC, another is about democratic social education. I don't have lunch time on Tuesday. After school, I usually go to the library for review on my classes and studying English. And I go back home around 7pm. Thank you always for your help. See you. I may be wake up.

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Hello [이름]^^ Just try to sleep earlier so you get enough sleep and not feel sleep during classes.hehehe. Thanks for sharing your schedule to me. -teacher Venus   I was sleeping while my class :( >>I was sleeping during my class.thank you for calling in succession. >>CORRECT J >>Thank you for calling for several times.As you told me earlier, I will go to bed early. >>CORRECT JHere are my school life. >>Here is my school life.I going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have a different schedules everyday. >>I'm going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have a different schedule everyday. >>I'm going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have different schedules everyday.I go to school at 10:30 in the morning, as It is time to begin my first class. >>I go to school at 10:30 in the morning, as it is the time to begin my first class.That subject is relationship of employer-employee. >>That subject is about the employer-employee relationship.The professor emphasis on relationship between human and human. >>The professor emphasizes on the relationship between humans. >>The professor's emphasis is on the relationship of humans.That class is end at noon. >>That class ends at noon.And I have 2 classes after that. >>CORRECT JThe one is class about TOEIC, another is about democratic social education. >>One class is TOEIC, another is about democratic social education. I don't have lunch time on Tuesday. >>CORRECT JAfter school, I usually go to the library for review on my classes and studying English. >>After school, I usually go to the library to review my classes and study English.And I go back home around 7pm. >>CORRECT J >>And I go back home around 7pm. -->> BETTERThank you always for your help. >>CORRECT JSee you. >>CORRECT J I may be wake up. >>I must be awake on our next meeting.  

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