Hi Venus~
학생이 쓴 원문
I was sleeping while my class :(
thank you for calling in succession.
As you told me earlier, I will go to bed early.
Here are my school life.
I going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have a different schedules everyday.
I go to school at 10:30 in the morning, as It is time to begin my first class.
That subject is relationship of employer-employee.
The professor emphasis on relationship between human and human.
That class is end at noon.
And I have 2 classes after that.
The one is class about TOEIC, another is about democratic social education. I don't have lunch time on Tuesday.
After school, I usually go to the library for review on my classes and studying English.
And I go back home around 7pm.
Thank you always for your help.
See you. I may be wake up.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]^^
Just try to sleep earlier so you get enough sleep and not feel sleep during classes.hehehe.
Thanks for sharing your schedule to me.
-teacher Venus
I was sleeping while my class :(
>>I was sleeping during my class.thank you for calling in succession.
>>CORRECT J
>>Thank you for calling for several times.As you told me earlier, I will go to bed early.
>>CORRECT JHere are my school life.
>>Here is my school life.I going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have a different schedules everyday.
>>I'm going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have a different schedule everyday.
>>I'm going to talk about my Tuesday schedule because I have different schedules everyday.I go to school at 10:30 in the morning, as It is time to begin my first class.
>>I go to school at 10:30 in the morning, as it is the time to begin my first class.That subject is relationship of employer-employee.
>>That subject is about the employer-employee relationship.The professor emphasis on relationship between human and human.
>>The professor emphasizes on the relationship between humans.
>>The professor's emphasis is on the relationship of humans.That class is end at noon.
>>That class ends at noon.And I have 2 classes after that.
>>CORRECT JThe one is class about TOEIC, another is about democratic social education.
>>One class is TOEIC, another is about democratic social education.
I don't have lunch time on Tuesday.
>>CORRECT JAfter school, I usually go to the library for review on my classes and studying English.
>>After school, I usually go to the library to review my classes and study English.And I go back home around 7pm.
>>CORRECT J
>>And I go back home around 7pm. -->> BETTERThank you always for your help.
>>CORRECT JSee you.
>>CORRECT J
I may be wake up.
>>I must be awake on our next meeting.
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