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Hi~ Verna. Somehow, l wrote a diary willy-nilly today. l think I'm indolent now. Please check my wrong grammar. 1.must 2.must 3.must 4.can 5.must 6.can 7.must 8.must 9.must 10.can Tue, 12th of June, 2012 Today I went to a clinic with my sister. And we drop by a resturant for dinner. The weather was so odd. Because It had been so hot in the morning However, suddenly the weather was blow hard and looked like gloomy. Then It's raining now. Oh! I saw a big fly in front of me. It's disgusting! I confused that is a bee or another bug. Why is it too big? Anyway I love rain. The sound of rain makes me feel relaxed and calm. When It comes rain, I used to stay at home of cafe. I want to stay inside. I don't want to walk around. Specially, When It comes rain in cafe is perfect! Cafe is more fresh and cool that my house because of air conditioner. Anyway I can see my boyfriend after few days. I already bought two play tickets for our date. It will be excitng!

Hello! Thank you for doing your homework my dearest student. =) I am very impressed by your effort. I hope you will continue doing this everyday. Here are the necessary corrections that you may need to improve your English communication skills. Take time to review them and apply them in your daily conversations. Take care and I\'ll catch you again soon! ~T. Verna Hi~ Verna. >>CORRECT!Somehow, l wrote a diary willy-nilly today. >>CORRECT!l think I\'m indolent now. >>CORRECT!Please check my wrong grammar. >>CORRECT!1.must >>CORRECT!2.must >>can3.must >>CORRECT!4.can >>CORRECT!5.must >>can\'t6.can >>CORRECT!7.must >>CORRECT!8.must >>CORRECT!9.must >>CORRECT!10.can >>CORRECT!Tue, 12th of June, 2012 >>CORRECT OR >>12 June, 2012 (Tuesday)Today I went to a clinic with my sister. >>Today, I went to a clinic with my sister.And we drop by a resturant for dinner. >>Then, we dropped by a restaurant for dinner.The weather was so odd. >>CORRECT!Because It had been so hot in the morning. >>That\'s because it had been so hot in the morning.However, suddenly the weather was blow hard and looked like gloomy. >>However, the wind suddenly blew hard and the sky turned gloomy.Then It\'s raining now. >>Afterwards, it started to rain.Oh! I saw a big fly in front of me. >>CORRECT!It\'s disgusting! >>CORRECT!I confused that is a bee or another bug. >>I was confused whether what I was seeing was a bee or a bug.Why is it too big? >>I thought to myself, why is it too big?Anyway I love rain. >>Anyway, I love the rain. The sound of rain makes me feel relaxed and calm. >>CORRECT!When It comes rain, I used to stay at home of cafe. >>When it rains, I would stay home or enjoy a cup of coffee in a cafe.I want to stay inside. >>CORRECT!I don\'t want to walk around. >>CORRECT!Specially, When It comes rain in cafe is perfect! >>I like the mood when the rain falls while I\'m in a cafe.Cafe is more fresh and cool that my house because of air conditioner. >>The cafe turns fresher and cooler than my house because of the air conditioner.Anyway I can see my boyfriend after few days. >>Anyway, I will be seeing my boyfriend after a few days.I already bought two play tickets for our date. >>CORRECT!It will be excitng! >>CORRECT! OR >>I\'m sure it\'s gonna be exciting!