Hi-Verna!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there! I am glad to see your composition. Thank you for doing them.I may say that you got a beautiful thought about things. It is really nice to know that you learned something from your job. ^^ Not all people can learn from their everyday activities. ^^ By the way, I also heard that Istanbul is a good place to visit. ^^ Good night.
T.Verna
Ling time no see, ma teacher!
>>Long time no see my teacher!
Let me check composition such as answer for question.
>>Let me check the composition and answer the questions.
1:I would like to go to Istanbul in Turkey.
>>1. CORRECT
I heard some information about that country from my friend.
>>CORRECT
He said to me there are have a lot of attraction, beautiful sights, many remains, traditional shops.
>>He said that there are a lot of attractions, beautiful sights, many remains, and traditional shops.
Honestly I lived Syria near turkey, but I haven’t any chance.
>>Honestly, I lived in Syria that is near to Turkey but I haven\'t got any chance.
So If I have a chance to go any country. I will go there.
>>So if I have a chance to go there, I will go there.
2.I worked in service field for about 1year 2month.
>>2. I worked in a service field for a year and 2 months.
At first I didn’t know how to deal with customer and sometimes I made mistakes.
>>At first, I didn\'t know how to deal with the customers and sometimes made mistakes.
Through senior, I’m steadily accustomed to how to do service.
>>With the help of my senior, I was accustomed to how the service works.
I think that the most important thing is bright smile& good attitude.
>> I think that the most important things are bright smile & good attitude.
Because our attitude would affect customer\'s feeling.
>>CORRECT
It was great opportunity to me and taught me that customers always come first anticipating my customers needs before they have to ask always makes a great impression on them.
>>It was a great opportunity to me and it taught me to anticipate the customers needs before they tell you. It always makes a great impression on them.
Making a great first impression is key to creating life long & regularly customers.
>>Making a great first impression is the key to create a life long & regular customers.
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.