Hi verna

2013-05-27 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi, I am a student of yours. After all, I'm writting my compositions on this web. It has stopped since March. I shouldn't have stopped this. I had thought of that It helped me improve my wirtting skills when I didn't stop it. So, I've decided to do it again. As you know, I'm leaving my office for 4 weeks for militery service. At that time, I can't study english. I've decided to memorize all paper's sentences that was printed a month ago releated to common idioms. It consists of more than 100 sentenses. I thought I can do anthing for improving my skills if I perpectly remember all sentences. I can remember all senstenses in connection with common idiom while I'm doing anthing during the militery service. I know I'm a person who is strongly eager to finish anything if any purpose is in mind. As you scored me, I need to study voca. I will study that if I'm allowed to take some books and read there.

강사 첨삭

Hello there [이름],

                 Nice to see you on this side of our website. I can feel the dedication that you have in studying English. Keep up the good job! See you tomorrow!

~Teacher Verna~

Hi, I am a student of yours.

>>Correct
 After all, I\'m writing my compositions on this web.
>>Correct
It has stopped since March. I shouldn\'t have stopped this.
>>Correct
I had thought of that It helped me improve my wirtting skills when I didn\'t stop it.

>>I thought that it helped me improve my writing skill when I was still doing it.

 So, I\'ve decided to do it again. 

>>Correct
 As you know, I\'m leaving my office for 4 weeks for military service. At that time, I can\'t study English. 
>>Correct
 I\'ve decided to memorize all paper\'s sentences that was printed a month ago related to common idioms. It consists of more than 100 sentences. 
>>Correct

I thought I can do anthing for improving my skills if I perpectly remember all sentences.

>>I thought I  can do everything I can to improve my skills if I perfectly remember all the sentences.

I can remember all sentences in connection with common idiom while I\'m doing anything during the military service.

>>Correct
I know I\'m a person who is strongly eager to finish anything if any purpose is in mind.
>>I know I\'m a person who can strongly finish anything if I keep my prose in my mind.

 As you scored me, I need to study vocab. I will study that if I\'m allowed to take some books and read there.

>>Correct

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