Hi verna
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there [이름],
Nice to see you on this side of our website. I can feel the dedication that you have in studying English. Keep up the good job! See you tomorrow!
~Teacher Verna~
Hi, I am a student of yours.
After all, I\'m writing my compositions on this web.
>>Correct
It has stopped since March. I shouldn\'t have stopped this.
>>Correct
I had thought of that It helped me improve my wirtting skills when I didn\'t stop it.
>>I thought that it helped me improve my writing skill when I was still doing it.
So, I\'ve decided to do it again.
As you know, I\'m leaving my office for 4 weeks for military service. At that time, I can\'t study English.
>>Correct
I\'ve decided to memorize all paper\'s sentences that was printed a month ago related to common idioms. It consists of more than 100 sentences.
>>Correct
I thought I can do anthing for improving my skills if I perpectly remember all sentences.
>>I thought I can do everything I can to improve my skills if I perfectly remember all the sentences.
I can remember all sentences in connection with common idiom while I\'m doing anything during the military service.
I know I\'m a person who is strongly eager to finish anything if any purpose is in mind.
>>I know I\'m a person who can strongly finish anything if I keep my prose in my mind.
As you scored me, I need to study vocab. I will study that if I\'m allowed to take some books and read there.
>>Correct
파워잉글리쉬 영어첨삭교정 서비스에 실제로 접수된 글입니다. 작성자와 글에 등장하는 사람·회사 이름, 연락처 등 개인을 알아볼 수 있는 정보는 모두 지웠습니다. 문법 오류는 학습 자료로서의 가치를 위해 원문 그대로 두었습니다.