Hi Verna,
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there [이름],
I'm very happy that I will meet you again later. Thank you for starting to believe in yourself.
Don't worry, I'm going to do my best to help you improve your ability. Enjoy learning English.
Love,
Verna
We will meet tomorrow.
>>Correct
I decided to try to believe myself again.
>>I decided to try to believe in myself again.
As that result, I can learn from you. You are the best teacher and inspire me.
>>As a result, I can learn from you. You are my best teacher and you inspire me.
Today I received e-mail of thanks from coordinator of my part-time job, interpretation.
>> Today, I received e-mails of appreciation from the coordinator of my part-time job ?Interpretation.
Actually I don't think I didn't do well the day, not only me but also my friends.
>>Actually, my friends and I think we didn't do well that day.
The day, there were 8 tables there and there were 8 to 10 people including Japanese and Korean each table.
>> That day, there were eight tables and there were eight to ten people in each table, which includes Japanese and Koreans.
Our seats were set.
>> Correct
There were young people in my table so we talked frankly.
>>Correct
It was really casual conversation. So I felt comfortable.
>>It was a really casual conversation so I felt comfortable.
But after the dinner, I heard there was quiet serious conversation in other tables using professional vocabularies.
>> But after the dinner, I heard there were quite serious conversations in other tables using professional vocabularies.
They were too embarrassed because their majors weren't that field.
>>Correct
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