Hi Verna,

2010-11-29 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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Hi~ Verna. How are your weekend? I tried to practice writing. But I feel still dificult. Q. What is the best way to serch for a new job? A; Nowdays We have a variety of way to serch for a job. So if you want to get a new job, you can choose the way to find a job. Now I'll explain the best way to find a job. Firstly, there is a recruitment website. There are many employer who wants to hire emplyee in the website. If you enroll in you resume in the website, company employer who interests in your career contact you directly. So I recommend you to join with a recruitment website. It's too short to writing practice roomㅜㅜ. Thank you!

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Hello there,         Thank you for passing another composition. I had great weekend. Keep up the good work! See you again tomorrow. Verna Hi~ Verna. >> CorrectHow are your weekend? >> How's your weekend?I tried to practice writing. >> CorrectBut I feel still dificult.>> But I feel it is still difficult.Q. What is the best way to serch for a new job? >>CorrectA; Nowdays We have a variety of way to serch for a job. >> Nowadays, we have variety of ways to search for a job.So if you want to get a new job, you can choose the way to find a job. >>CorrectNow, I'll explain the best way to find a job. >> CorrectFirstly, there is a recruitment website. >>First, there is a recruitment website.There are many employer who wants to hire emplyee in the website. >>There are many employer who wants to hire employee on the website.If you enroll in you resume in the website, company employer who interests in your career contact you directly. >>If you pass your resume in the website,t company employer who are interested  in your career will contact you directly.So I recommend you to join with a recruitment website. >>So I recommend you to join a recruitment website.It's too short to writing practice roomㅜㅜ. >>The space for writing is too short. Thank you! >> Correct

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