hi, Verna

2011-05-30 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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I have been to my hubby's family gathering yesterday. We're so intimate with one another and had so much fun. While we were talking and laughing together, an unexpected accident happened. One of my hubby's niece complained about his husband in front of him and all the family members that her hubby didn't send her text messages frequently as often as she had wanted. Almost elder people said that she had to understand her hubby and she cried. I was perplexed since I was one of the elders who had blamed her, even not so hardly. On the one hand, I'm concerned about it and, on the other hand, I envy her who used to get more than 2 texts a day from her hubby. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름],        Whoa! That's a very rare incident. I think I know where you husband's niece is coming. Generally, girls always want to be pampered by their husbands. Since she cannot get that she wants affection and understanding from the people around her. I hope they can settle that. Thanks for writing! -Verna-   I have been to my hubby's family gathering yesterday. >> I had been to my hubby's family gathering yesterday.  We're so intimate with one another and had so much fun. >>Correct While we were talking and laughing together, an unexpected accident happened. >> While we were talking and laughing together, an unexpected incident happened. One of my hubby's niece complained about his husband in front of him and all the family members that her hubby didn't send her text messages frequently as often as she had wanted. >> One of my hubby's nieces complained about his husband in front of him and all the family members that her hubby didn't send her text messages as frequent as she wanted.  Almost elder people said that she had to understand her hubby and she cried. >> Almost all the elder people said that she had to understand her hubby but then she cried.  I was perplexed since I was one of the elders who had blamed her, even not so hardly. >>Correct  On the one hand, I'm concerned about it and, on the other hand, I envy her who used to get more than 2 texts a day from her hubby. :) >> On one hand, I'm concerned about it and on the other hand, I envy those who get more than 2 text messages a day from thier hubbies. :)

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