Hi, Verna!

Hi. I am having a hard time these days due to too much work to do. I want to cry. Please kindly revise email below. I accepted repair work for the handrail issue that I mentioned to you before. Dear Sir, Thank you for your cooperation. We received approval for your repair work from the customer. But the repair work should be conducted perfectly. There will be a request for the additional work, if the same handrail problems happen again after this repair work. Well, there is one polluted part for each handrail. So total polluted parts are 11 parts in this jobsite and the length of polluted part is between 40~80cm for each handrail. Refer to the attached file. Best regards, Junyoung, Lee

Hi there. Your composition is sure a good output. I had a lot of fun reading your almost perfect composition. The way you structured your sentences although basic is almost precise. Keep it up! Check the corrections and practice on them. With thorough practice you can be better. (^_^) Teacher Verna   Hi. I am having a hard time these days due to too much work to do. I want to cry. >>CORRECT >>OR I am having a hard time these days because I have so much work to do. I wanted to cry.Please kindly revise email below. >>Please kindly revise the email below. I accepted repair work for the handrail issue that I mentioned to you before. >>CORRECTDear Sir, >>CORRECTThank you for your cooperation. >>CORRECTWe received approval for your repair work from the customer. >>We received an approval for your repair work from the customer.But the repair work should be conducted perfectly. >>CORRECTThere will be a request for the additional work, if the same handrail problems happen again after this repair work. >>There will be a request for an additional work, if the same handrail problems happen again after the repair.Well, there is one polluted part for each handrail. >>CORRECTSo total polluted parts are 11 parts in this jobsite and the length of polluted part is between 40~80cm for each handrail. >>So there are 11 polluted parts in total in this jobsite and the length of each polluted part of the handrail is between 40-80cm. Refer to the attached file. >>CORRECTBest regards, >>CORRECTJunyoung, Lee >>CORRECT