Hi Vicky, I read another article last week
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I read another article that I have to summary and present last week.
Professor said that if I summary another article, then he will give an advantage like plus points on the assignment, so I read another one whose topic is on capabilities which are quiet important for some companies' growth, but I don't completely understand the detailed content because it's so hard to understand. However, I can understand the main topic and subject of the article. It says that capabilities mean invisible factors of some companies to compete with other competitors successfully. Those meaning is different from that of core competence which usually means technologies and production methods. On the contray, capabilities means abilities that could be all process of value chain of the company. The article takes an example on Wal-Mart to explain the concept of capabilities. Wal-Mart's key capability is based on it's inventory replenishment that makes it possible EDLP(Every Day Low Prices)
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Hi [이름]!^^
It\'s good to hear from you again. I hope that you professor will give you more than five additional points.^^ Thank you for sending me this composition and I also hope that it will help you.
Teacher Vicky
Here are my corrections for you:
I read another article that I have to summary and present last week.
>> I read another article which I had to summarize and present last week. Professor said that if I summary another article, then he will give an advantage like plus points on the assignment, so I read another
>> My professor said that if I would summarize another article, he would give additional points to me, so I read another one.
one whose topic is on capabilities which are quiet important for some companies\' growth, but I don\'t completely understand the detailed content because it\'s so hard to understand.
>> The other topic was about the capabilities that companies need for their growth, but I did not completely understand it.
However, I can understand the main topic and subject of the article.
>> However, I can understand the main topic and the content of the article.
It says that capabilities mean invisible factors of some companies to compete with other competitors successfully.
>> It says that capabilities means invisible factors of some companies that are used to compete with their competitors successfully.
Those meaning is different from that of core competence which usually means technologies and production methods.
>> This meaning is different from that of core competencies which usually means technologies and production methods.
On the contray, capabilities means abilities that could be all process of value chain of the company.
>> On the contrary, capabilities means abilities in the process like the value chain of the company.
The article takes an example on Wal-Mart to explain the concept of capabilities.
>> The article talked about Wal-Mart in order to explain the concept of capabilities.
Wal-Mart\'s key capability is based on it\'s inventory replenishment that makes it possible EDLP(Every Day Low Prices)
>> Wal-Mart\'s key capability is based on it\'s inventory replenishment which is known as EDLP (Evryday Low Prices)
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