HI. Wendy.

2011-07-29 · 첨삭 강사 Wendy

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Wendy.. Good to meet you! I had a good time with you at the first class. Especilly thank you for give me some good tips for the baby. You already had three children, it makes me so surprised. I guess you are a good mother. I heard the typhoon strucked the philipine, some areas suffered from typhoon. as you know, Seoul in korea was damaged by a heavy rain. So these day I can hear just a bad news. At the earliest it recovers from the effect of the rain, I wish I can hear a good news. Have a nice weekend with your lovely girls and your husbund.

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Hi [이름], It's really nice meeting you. I had a wonderful time with our first day together. Don't make yourself feel bad about the news because it also affects your baby so maybe try to avoid bad news and always keep smiling. You also enjoy your weekend with your family. -T.Wendy- Here are some corrections: Wendy..Good to meet you! >>CORRECT or It's nice to meet you.I had a good time with you at the first class. >>I had a good time with you in our first class.Especilly thank you for give me some good tips for the baby. >>Especially I want to thank you for giving me tips for my baby.You already had three children, it makes me so surprised. >>CORRECTI guess you are a good mother.>>CORRECTI heard the typhoon strucked the philipine, some areas suffered from typhoon. >>I hear that a typhoon hits the Philippines.as you know, Seoul in korea was damaged by a heavy rain. >>Korea/CORRECTSo these day I can hear just a bad news. >>So today I only heard about bad news.At the earliest it recovers from the effect of the rain, >>I hope that everybody recovers from the rain as early as possible. I wish I can hear a good news. >>CORRECTHave a nice weekend with your lovely girls and your husbund. >>Husband/CORRECT

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