high fever

2017-11-02 · 첨삭 강사 Eunice

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What' the matter? Why she don't wear any clothes? She may have terrible cold. it's very high fever. And she often grinds her teeth. she seem to have terrible headaches. I am trying to reduce a fever for her. How is her sleeping? Well, she get enough sleep. How was the condition before her going to bed? It was very good. I could let her sleep easily. There was any symptoms last night. Ok, I got it. It is better to go to hospital instead keeping her in the bed. Please try to do things that help him relax before going to hospital.

강사 첨삭

Happy Thursday [이름]!

Your composition is somehow related to our weather today. It\'s raining heavily and I feel like I am a little bit under the weather today. There is nothing constant when it comes to the weather. It\'s really unpredictable but all we have to do is to have protection against sudden things. Have a productive day!

~Teacher Eunice


What\' the matter?
>> What\'s the matter?
Why she don\'t wear any clothes?
>> Why she doesn\'t wear any clothes?
She may have terrible cold. it\'s very high fever.
>> She has a high fever.

>> She caught a terrible cold last night.
 And she often grinds her teeth. she seem to have terrible headaches.
>> She often grinds her teeth because of her terrible headache.
 I am trying to reduce a fever for her.
>> I am trying to cool down her fever.
>> I am trying to cool down her body temperature.
 How is her sleeping?
>> How does she sleep?

>> How is her sleep?
 Well, she get enough sleep.
>>  Well, she gets enough sleep.
 How was the condition before her going to bed?
>> How\'s her condition before she had gone to bed?
 It was very good. I could let her sleep easily.
>> It was good so I let her sleep easily.
 There was any symptoms last night.
>> Correct!
 Ok, I got it.
>> All right, I got it.
 It is better to go to hospital instead keeping her in the bed.
>> It is better to bring her to the hospital instead of letting her lying on the bed.
 Please try to do things that help him relax before going to hospital.
>> Please try to do things that will help him relax before going to the hospital.

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