High Hopes

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Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:

\'Hogh Hopes\' of \'panic!at the disco\'is quite hopeful song, but also very sober. 

>> \'High Hopes\' of \'Panic at the Disco\' is quite a hopeful song, but also very sober. 

It says about harsh dreamer who doesn\'t have any power yet, but would be successful with one\'s hopes.

>> It tells about a harsh dreamer who doesn\'t have any power yet, but would be successful with one\'s hopes.
I really hope I could start challenges in my life and do something what I would do after five yers later.

>> I really hope I could start challenges in my life and do something that I would still be doing after five years.
Although I have some high hopes, I hope I can have higher hopes than now.

>> CORRECT!