High School
학생이 쓴 원문
I went boys-only high school. I had focused on my study more because of the community of same gender. It was so helpful to me in case of study but at the point of sociability, I couldn\'t learn how to talk or get relationship with girls. When I went on University, I regreted not to go normal high school with girls and boys. As time flows, I get used to talk with girls and now I can totally treat other people regardless of gender.
강사 첨삭
Hi John!
This experience is very familiar to me.
It\'s amazing how you went through the same thing.
You explained your point really well.
I was able to relate.
Good job!^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I went boys-only high school.
>> I went to an all-boys high school.
I had focused on my study more because of the community of same gender.
>> I focused on my studies more because all students were of the same gender.
It was so helpful to me in case of study but at the point of sociability, I couldn\'t learn how to talk or get relationship with girls.
>> It was so helpful to me in terms of studying but when it comes to being social, I didn\'t learn how to talk or have a relationship with girls.
When I went on University, I regreted not to go normal high school with girls and boys.
>> When I got to college, I regretted not going to an ordinary high school with both girls and boys.
As time flows, I get used to talk with girls and now I can totally treat other people regardless of gender.
>> As time passed by, I got used to talking with girls and now I can interact with other people regardless of gender.
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