High school graduates

A genius girl who passed the Harvard and Stanford university enterance examination at the same time lost her prestige name and became liar. It was very supprising that a little girl told a lie to everybody and we ,as adult, were also embarrassed by the deceit of young girl and showed an extravagant behavior. These phenomenon is probably due to an adoration of the academical clique. A CEO of the well known leading company in the field of industrial X-ray is a high school graduate. He said " No body asked me my academic career when he bought my products.It is right. Academic career of the boss is not important when we bought something and it is even natural that we don't ask an academic career of the workers. Over the half of the my worker are high school graduates. I would like to give them a dream that he can succeed by only loving their work not their academic career." The more important thing is put a value on what he is doing now regardless of high school or university graduates

Dear [Name]. [이름], An energetic and a healthy Monday to us! ^.^ Happy day! ^,^ It is just now that I had enough energy to check your composition. I am so sorry. T.T Anyway, thank you for another sharing. We should really give more importance toward the things we do and don\'t think a lot about what we finished at school. What matters is how we do our best every day! ^^  That\'s all! ^^ Happy reading and sorry! See you later! ^^, ... Teacher Paula ... ^.~ A genius girl who passed the Harvard and Stanford university enterance examination at the same time lost her prestige name and became liar.  >> A genius girl who passed the Harvard and Stanford University entrance examination at the same time lost her prestige name and became liar. (SPELLING) It was very supprising that a little girl told a lie to everybody and we ,as adult, were also embarrassed by the deceit of young girl and showed an extravagant behavior.  >> It was very surprising that a little girl told a lie to everybody, and we, as adults, were also embarrassed by the deceit of young girl and showed an extravagant behavior. (SPELLING and PUNCTUATION) These phenomenon is probably due to an adoration of the academical clique.  >> CORRECT! A CEO of the well known leading company in the field of industrial X-ray is a high school graduate.  >> The CEO of the well-known leading company in the field of industrial X-ray is a high school graduate. (ARTICLE) He said \" No body asked me my academic career when he bought my products.  >> He said, \"Nobody asked me my academic career when I bought my products. It is right. >> CORRECT! >> OR: It is true. Academic career of the boss is not important when we bought something and it is even natural that we don\'t ask an academic career of the workers.  >> Academic career of the boss is not important when we bought something, and it is even natural that we don\'t ask an academic career of the workers. (PUNCTUATION) Over the half of the my worker are high school graduates.  >> Over half of my workers are high school graduates. (GRAMMAR STRUCTURE) >> OR: Over half of my employees are high school graduates. I would like to give them a dream that he can succeed by only loving their work not their academic career.\"  >> I would like to give them a dream that they can succeed by only loving their work not their academic career.\" (GRAMMAR STRUCTURE) The more important thing is put a value on what he is doing now regardless of high school or university graduates >> I THINK WHAT YOU WANT TO SAY IS: The most important thing is to put value on what he is doing now regardless of educational attainment.