High school students should wear uniforms.

Dear [이름],

A MAGNIFICENT Monday to you! ^.^

First of all, I would like to thank you for doing your homework. ^^

Now, let me share my thought about this matter.

For me, I like wearing uniforms, because it is practical.

I don\'t need to think of what I should wear every day.

In addition, it is also a proof that I belong to a specific institution or company.

When I was in elementary and high school, I always enjoyed wearing my uniforms.

I could feel belongingness.

That\'s all for today! ^^

Have a great time for reading! ^^,

Enjoy this day! ^^.

... Teacher Paula ... ^.~

P.S.: Don\'t forget to see the corrections and suggestions below.

It has been controversial since I and my parents was in school.

>> CORRECT!

I did not like wearing uniform because it made all students looks same.

>> I did not like wearing uniform, because it made all students look the same.

When people reach the age of puberty, they would like to express their personality or individuality with wearing unique or beautiful clothes.

>> When people reach the age of puberty, they would like to express their personality or individuality by wearing unique or beautiful clothes.

If it is mandatory to wear a uniform at school, most of parents would be happy.

>> If it is mandatory to wear a uniform at school, most parents would be happy.

Because they could save their money to buy child\'s clothes.

>> It is because they could save their money to buy children\'s clothes.

However students might refuse to wear a uniform.

>> However, students might refuse to wear their uniforms.

Wearing uniforms have merits and faults.

>> Wearing uniforms has merits and demerits.

If we wore uniforms, we would not have to think about what we wear before going to the school in the morning.

>> If we wear uniforms, we will not have to think about what we wear before going to school in the morning.

The other way, we would feel depressed due to no chance to select our clothes.

>> On the other hand, we would feel depressed due to no chance to select our clothes.

>> OR: On the other hand, we would feel depressed due the lack of chance to choose the clothes we want to wear.