High schools should allow students to study the courses that students want to study.

2016-08-17 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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What I think is that there should be common subjects that high school students should study, although there could some selective classes that student can choose based on their preference. Until high school, there are fundamental courses that student should study such as math, his/her own mother tongue, and English. The basic classes are necessary for them to study further when they go to college. In Korea, there are basically two types of high schools. One is for entering college and the other one is vocational schools. Each vocational school has its own specialty and teaches its students in accordance with its philosophy of school establishment. Each vocational school has compulsory and elective classes like college. So depending on what type of high school it is, the curriculum varies widely and you have some options to choose your favorite courses to some extent. For instance, if you like cooking and are not interested in going to college, you can go to cooking school.

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Good day Sir [이름]! I appreciate that you did your composition. I was able to learn something again from it. You are right! The basic subjects are necessary for them in the future. We also have vocational schools in the Philippines. And some of them are offering jobs overseas after they graduate. Thank you for your time again. You did great! See you in class. Teacher Nina   What I think is that there should be common subjects that high school students should study, although there could some selective classes that student can choose based on their preference. >> correct Until high school, there are fundamental courses that student should study such as math, his/her own mother tongue, and English. >> correct The basic classes are necessary for them to study further when they go to college. >> correct In Korea, there are basically two types of high schools. >> correct One is for entering college and the other one is vocational schools. >> correct Each vocational school has its own specialty and teaches its students in accordance with its philosophy of school establishment. >> correct Each vocational school has compulsory and elective classes like college. >> correct So depending on what type of high school it is, the curriculum varies widely and you have some options to choose your favorite courses to some extent. >> correct For instance, if you like cooking and are not interested in going to college, you can go to cooking school. >> correct

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