High-tech!!!
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Mr.Williams the scientist has found a substance called fitincium. ⚗It\'s used to trace any shape or mold to make a clone
(?). So, now every one in our village has it. Look at its skills! If you put it into a key hole, the claylike fitincium traces the shape of the original key and turns solid and if you pull it out of the mold, it turns into a claylike substance again. Also, when it\'s claylike, it actually looks like clay, so no one can steal our invention, and can even sneak it to school! And be careful not to let teachers see. Teachers think it\'s clay and they say, \"No clays in class. Give it to me.\" And if you shape it into a perfect square, it turns into a solid screen and can contact with Mr.Williams! By the way, with this, my best friends Joseph, Dorothea, Helen, Jessica and Maddie, we asked Mr.Williams for fitincium 2* and traced a treehouse! So we now have a club called Fitin-C in the treehouse.
*Fitincium 2 is fitincium that stays solid even when you pull it out of the mold.😊
강사 첨삭
Good day, Heather! What a great imagination you have. I\'m not sure if it is possible to make or create clones especially human clones. We will talk more about this in class. I will see you then.~ T. Lyn
Mr.Williams the scientist has found a substance called fitincium.
>>A scientist, Mr. [Name], discovered a substance called fitincium.
It\'s used to trace any shape or mold to make a clone(?).
>>It is used to trace certain shapes or mold to make replicas or clones.
So, now every one in our village has it.
>>Correct.
Look at its skills!
>>Look at that skill or ability.
If you put it into a key hole, the claylike fitincium traces the shape of the original key and turns solid and if you pull it out of the mold, it turns into a claylike substance again.
>>When placed in the keyhole, the clay-like fitincium hardens to follow the shape of the oiginal key, and when removed, from the mold, it turns back into a clay-like substance.
Also, when it\'s claylike, it actually looks like clay, so no one can steal our invention, and can even sneak it to school!
>>Also, it actually looks like clay, so no one can steal the invention and even sneak them into our school.
And be careful not to let teachers see.
>>And need to be careful not to let the teachers see.
Teachers think it\'s clay and they say, \"No clays in class. Give it to me.\"
>>The teachers thought it was clay and said, \"There is no class in class, so give it to me.\"
And if you shape it into a perfect square, it turns into a solid screen and can contact with Mr.Williams!
>>Correct.
By the way, with this, my best friends Joseph, Dorothea, Helen, Jessica and Maddie, we asked Mr.Williams for fitincium 2* and traced a treehouse!
>>By the way, with this, along with my best friends, Joseph, Dorothea, Helen, Jessica, and Maddie, I asked Mr. [Name] for a fitincium 2 and tacked down the tree house.
So we now have a club called Fitin-C in the treehouse.
>>We now have a club called Fitin-C in the tree house.
*Fitincium 2 is fitincium that stays solid even when you pull it out of the mold.
*Fitincium 2 is fitincium that stays solid even when you pull it out of the mold.
>>Fitincium 2 is a fitincium that remains solid even removed from the mold.
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