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However, the company abused this purpose.

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The company was in the red in the first half.

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Once they are registered, they will no longer be able to use their name when they leave their company.

>>Once they were registered, they would no longer be able to use their name when they leave the company.

If they win the trial, they can use their name, but then you waste a lot of time and money.

>>If they will win in the trial they can use their name, but that process will waste a lot of money and time.

A example is \'신화‘ ． ’신화‘ also kept their name after a long struggle.

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However, they debuted under the new name, \'Highlight\' When they had a show case,

>>However, they were debuted under a new name \"Highlight\" when they had a show.

Yo seop said that we thought fans liked not the name \'Beast\' but ourselves.

>>DID YOU MEAN: Yo Seop said that we thought that fans didn\'t like the name \"Beast\".

I totally agreed with it.

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Then I will introduce each member.

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My favorite member, is \'Du jun\' And you guys know why I told \'How to get a boyfriend.\' with him.

>>DID YOU MEAN: My favorite member is \"Du Jun\", and you know guys, I told him the \"How to Get a Boyfriend\"

When I was a middle school I read a lots of books.

>>When I was in middle school, I read a lot of books.

Actually they was FanFic.

>>Actually it was FanFic.

He was born on July 4, 1989.

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He is leader of this group.

>>He was the leader of this group.

And he is really good at acting.

>>And he was really good at acting.

Do you know \'퐁당퐁당　러브‘　I think 예원　really loves this drama.

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