Highlight!!!!!!3

2017-05-29 · 첨삭 강사 Marie

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It `s about the love story between the king 세종 and the high school student who went to the past. If you look the two, it feels great and good. It was a web drama where two of them went so well and the story was so solid that they recorded high views. Last year, my friends watched that drama together. I remember all of the ambassadors because I watched the final episodes more than five times, Highlight is the part of my school life. I really hope they work as entertainers for a long time, Thank you for listening.

강사 첨삭

Hello there, [이름].

Thanks for sending in a composition.

I\'m very curious about this web drama now.

Please check my corrections here.

I will try to look for it and watch it. :)

Ciao!

~Teacher Marie~ ^^

It\'s about the love story between the king 세종 and the high school student who went to the past.

>> It\'s a love story between King Sejong and a high school student who went back in time.

If you look the two, it feels great and good.

>> If you look at the two (characters) you would feel great.

It was a web drama where two of them went so well and the story was so solid that they recorded high views.

>> It was a web drama where the two of them had great chemistry. The story was so solid that it recorded high viewership ratings.

Last year, my friends watched that drama together. 

>> Last year, my friends and I watched that drama together.

 I remember all of the ambassadors because I watched the final episodes more than five times, Highlight is the part of my school life.

>> I remember all of the ambassadors (in that drama) because I watched the final episode more than five times. \"Highlight\" was part of my school life.

I really hope they work as entertainers for a long time.

>> CORRECT!

Thank you for listening.

>> CORRECT!

OR:
>> Thank you for reading.

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