Highlight!!!!!!3
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, [이름].
Thanks for sending in a composition.
I\'m very curious about this web drama now.
Please check my corrections here.
I will try to look for it and watch it. :)
Ciao!
~Teacher Marie~ ^^
It\'s about the love story between the king 세종 and the high school student who went to the past.
>> It\'s a love story between King Sejong and a high school student who went back in time.
If you look the two, it feels great and good.
>> If you look at the two (characters) you would feel great.
It was a web drama where two of them went so well and the story was so solid that they recorded high views.
>> It was a web drama where the two of them had great chemistry. The story was so solid that it recorded high viewership ratings.
Last year, my friends watched that drama together.
>> Last year, my friends and I watched that drama together.
I remember all of the ambassadors because I watched the final episodes more than five times, Highlight is the part of my school life.
>> I remember all of the ambassadors (in that drama) because I watched the final episode more than five times. \"Highlight\" was part of my school life.
I really hope they work as entertainers for a long time.
>> CORRECT!
Thank you for listening.
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>> Thank you for reading.
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