Highlight!!!!!!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
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Today I am going to introduce my lovers who are called \"Hightlight\'.
>> Today I am going to introduce my favorite group and they are the \"Highlight\".
They are five members.
>> There are five members of the group.
Their title song is \'얼굴 찌푸리지 말아요
>> The title of their song is \"Do not frown\".
Actually they have more hit songs such as \'Fiction\' \'비가 오는 날엔.‘ and \'Good Luck.
>> Actually they have three hit songs such as Fiction, On rainy days and Good Luck.
But, it`s \'Beast\' \'s hit songs \' and not \' Highlight\'`s hit songs.
>> But it\'s not Highlight\'s hit songs because it belongs to the group Beast.
As you guys think this name is so weird.
>> As you guys think, this name is so weird.
Some people said \' If their name is Highlight, ther fandom is shading .
>> Some people said that if their name is Highlight, their fandom will conceal.
Then, I will tell you why they have to change their name.
>> Correct
Beast had earned about the half of Cube Entertainment revenues.
>> Beast had earned about the half of the Cube Entertainment revenues.
However, as soon as the end of the contract was near, Cube Entertainment registered trademark rights.
>> However, as soon as the end of the contract was near, the Cube Entertainment registered in trademark rights.
Trademark rights mean the right to use the registered trademark exclusively for the designated goods.
>> Trademark rights means, it is the right to use the registered trademark exclusively for the designated goods.
The purpose of protecting registered trademarks in this way is to protect the trademark users\' business credit and contribute to industrial development and to protect the interests of consumers.
>> The purpose of registered trademarks is to protect the users\' business trademark credit and to be able to contribute to industrial development and to protect the interests of the consumers.
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