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Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.
I think that is diffrent for who.
someone mayby more better learn with a teacher than leran alone or not.
In my case, it diffrent as the situation.
most time I prepare to learn with teacher.
but, when I need to memorize something or there is something I can't understood problem or the teacher is whom I hate..:p
kikiki.
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is this correct? I trying to mark followed my head.
1. since last week (X)
V-ed N
2. since have last week (O)
have p,p N
3. In 2002, He has visited in korea (X)
S have p,p
4. In 2002, He visit in korea (0)
S V
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Hi Su [이름]! Yes, sometimes following what's in your head or instinct may give good results. You voiced out your opinions well. And I am glad to be your teacher.
T. Michelle
Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons to develop your essay.I think that is diffrent for who.
>> I think that is it different for every one.someone mayby more better learn with a teacher than leran alone or not.
>> Someone may learn better with a teacher than learning on his own.
>> Someone may learn better with a teacher than learning by himself.In my case, it diffrent as the situation.
>> In my case, the situation is different.most time I prepare to learn with teacher.
>> Most of the time, I prefer to learn with a teacher.but, when I need to memorize something or there is something I can\'t understood problem or the teacher is whom I hate..:p
>> But, when I need to memorize something or there is a problem I can't understand, I hate my teacher.kikiki. ----------------------------is this correct? I trying to mark followed my head.
>> Is this correct? I tried marking them following what's in my head.1. since last week (X)V-ed N>> Correct.2. since have last week (O)have p,p N >> since last week3. In 2002, He has visited in korea (X)S have p,p>> Correct.
>> In 2002, he has visited Korea.4. In 2002, He visit in korea (0)S V
>> In 2002, he visited in Korea.
>> In 2002,he visited Korea.
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