HiHi^^*
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Jessica~
I want correct that I told you about my favorit America drama.
Title isn't "Sex in the City"
Title is "Sex And the City" ^^!!
There are 4 women's friendship and love.
The 4 women are all single. But after, they were got married 3women of them. Not 4women^^hahaha~
My favorit drama is "the queen of Seonduk"
Do you know it?
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Hi,Mi [이름]!
Yes, the show Sex and the City?focused on four American women, three in their mid-thirties and one in her forties.
The quirky series had multiple continuing story lines and tackled socially relevant issues.
And yes, I know the drama series ?The Queen of Seonduk?but I havent watched it yet, maybe if given the chance to watch that drama series. I hope to hear from you again, Mi [이름]?See you
I want correct that I told you about my favorit America drama.
>>>I want to correct what I told you about my favorite American drama.
Title isn't "Sex in the City" Title is "Sex And the City" ^^!!
>>>The title isn't 'Sex in the City' but rather 'Sex and the City'
There are 4 women's friendship and love.
>>>It is about friendship and love stories of four women.
The 4 women are all single.
>>>All of the four women are single.
But after, they were got married 3women of them. Not 4women^^hahaha~
>>>But after, three of them got married.
My favorit drama is "the queen of Seonduk"
>>>My favorite drama is the Queen of Seonduk.
Do you know it?
>>>correct sentence
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