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2010-11-04 · 첨삭 강사 ali

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Jessica~ I want correct that I told you about my favorit America drama. Title isn't "Sex in the City" Title is "Sex And the City" ^^!! There are 4 women's friendship and love. The 4 women are all single. But after, they were got married 3women of them. Not 4women^^hahaha~ My favorit drama is "the queen of Seonduk" Do you know it?

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Hi,Mi [이름]!   Yes,  the show Sex and the City?focused on four American women, three in their mid-thirties and one in her forties. The quirky series had multiple continuing story lines and tackled socially relevant issues. And yes, I know the drama series ?The Queen of Seonduk?but I havent watched it yet, maybe if given the chance to watch that drama series. I hope to hear from you again, Mi [이름]?See you I want correct that I told you about my favorit America drama. >>>I want to correct what I told you about my favorite American drama. Title isn't "Sex in the City"  Title is "Sex And the City" ^^!! >>>The title isn't 'Sex in the City' but rather 'Sex and the City' There are 4 women's friendship and love. >>>It is about friendship and love stories of four women. The 4 women are all single. >>>All of the four women are single. But after, they were got married 3women of them. Not 4women^^hahaha~ >>>But after, three of them got married. My favorit drama is "the queen of Seonduk" >>>My favorite drama is the Queen of Seonduk. Do you know it? >>>correct sentence    

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