HIIIII
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi Ssun!
I did hear about the T-express.
I have also seen some pictures.
I will definitely not try it because I\'m scared.
But I\'m glad you get to experience these things.
You are really an adventurer.
~~ Teacher Sharon
My health is mine.
>> It is my health.
I have responsibility.
>> I have the responsibility to take care of it.
If I was sick, no one could cover for me.
>> If I were sick, no one could take my place.
I have to prevent in advance.
>> I have to keep myself from getting sick.
In the world, someone who can care me is only me.
>> I am the only one who can take care of myself in this world.
Parents can\"t help all for me.
>> My parents can\'t do everything for me.
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