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2018-08-13 · 첨삭 강사 Sharon

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My health is mine. I have responsibility. If I was sick, no one could cover for me. I have to prevent in advance. In the world, someone who can care me is only me. Parents can"t help all for me. __what I recomended while ago is T-express!!not key express!!haha In korea, the biggest amusement park is 'Everland. In Everland, there is the T-express!! You can take it if you are 150cm or taller than 150cm !!byebye~~~~

강사 첨삭

Hi Ssun!

I did hear about the T-express.

I have also seen some pictures.

I will definitely not try it because I\'m scared.

But I\'m glad you get to experience these things.

You are really an adventurer.

~~ Teacher Sharon

My health is mine.

>> It is my health.
I have responsibility.

>> I have the responsibility to take care of it.
If I was sick, no one could cover for me.

>> If I were sick, no one could take my place.
I have to prevent in advance.

>> I have to keep myself from getting sick.
In the world, someone who can care me is only me.

>> I am the only one who can take care of myself in this world.
Parents can\"t help all for me.

>> My parents can\'t do everything for me.

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