hiking
학생이 쓴 원문
I agree to Hiking scholarship because we need like this at least to cooperate with others.
Of course there are existence cheating student though manipulating apps.
But the more they use such tricks, the more they lost real life.
강사 첨삭
Good day, Ms. [이름]!
Yes, I am impressed with the initiative to help students study by providing a smart and healthy way to acquire a scholarship. I think the students will have a hard time manipulating the apps, especially since Korea has a lot of CCTVs. We\'ll let\'s see what they\'re proposing more.
Have a great time.
Aki~
I agree to Hiking scholarship because we need like this at least to cooperate with others.
>>> I agree to the Hiking scholarship because we need like this at least to cooperate with others.
Of course there are existence cheating student though manipulating apps.
>>> Of course, there are existing cheating students who are manipulating apps.
But the more they use such tricks, the more they lost real life.
>>> But the more they use such tricks, the more they lose real life.
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