hiking
학생이 쓴 원문
I believe that such hiking scholarship in special university lead a positive influence even slowly.
Because their good experience can change other people.
Specially KAIST is the best excellent student, so their good values is important to others.
We need good leaders who has sound values and public conscience in Korea.
That is very upset that we don\'t have good leaders in Korea society.
강사 첨삭
Ms. [이름]!
I am excited as I look forward to the influence of this \" Hiking Scholarship\". I am also hoping such kind of inittaive will happen inthe Philippines, As you know, tution fees are increasing every year and if we do have such program, a lot of students would be applying for this.
Thank you~
Aki!
I believe that such hiking scholarship in special university lead a positive influence even slowly.
>>> I believe that such a hiking scholarship in a special university leads to a gradual, positive influence.
Because their good experience can change other people.
>> CORRECT!
Specially KAIST is the best excellent student, so their good values is important to others.
>>> Especially KAIST is the best excellent student, so their good values are important to others.
We need good leaders who has sound values and public conscience in Korea.
>>> We need good leaders who have sound values and a public conscience in Korea.
That is very upset that we don\'t have good leaders in Korea society.
>>> That is very upset that we don\'t have good leaders in Korean society.
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