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I haven\'t been talked with famous person. If I can I want to talk with BTS. Because I like BTS. My favorite member of BTS is V. I really want to talk with famous person like BTS.
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Hi [이름]!
I hope your dream comes true one day.
I know you would really enjoy that.
No one knows what can happen.^^
~~ Teacher Sharon
I haven\'t been talked with famous person. >> I haven\'t talked with a famous person yet.
If I can I want to talk with BTS.
>> If I can, I want to talk with the members of BTS.
Because I like BTS.
>> It\'s because I like BTS.
My favorite member of BTS is V.
>> Correct
I really want to talk with famous person like BTS.
>> I really want to talk with famous people like BTS.
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